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JAC Volume 10 Issue 1

Editor:
Gary A. Olson

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Argument and Analysis: Reading, Thinking, Writing, Lynn Dianne Beene and Krystan Douglas (New York: Holt, 1989, 600 pages).

Book Review by Marie J. Secor, Pennsylvania State University

The recent interest in argumentation among compositionists has been marked by the increasing number of textbooks and readers on the subject. The sources of this interest are varied. First, the writing-across-the-curriculum movement has led many to see argument as a unifying concept, a perspective that cuts across the disciplines and abstracts the elements shared by all academic writing situations. The principles governing effective argumentation are field-invariant and can be expressed in general terms, though their application and emphasis will vary from one discourse community to another. Second, the very notion of advanced composition as distinguishable from freshman or developmental composition precipitates a turn toward the study of argumentation. After all, if argumentation has traditionally been the last assignment in the conventional, modes-oriented composition course, it makes sense that it should be the starting point for the next semester of composition instruction. From this perspective, the study of argument seems to find its natural home in advanced composition.

Anthologies emphasizing argumentation, therefore, contribute to the -development of advanced composition courses and are welcome additions because they are not just compilations of the same chestnuts that have filled modes readers for the past twenty years; they can do much to increase the range and subject matter of appropriate reading material for composition courses. At their best, they encourage critical reading and thinking and -enlarge students’ understanding of discourse in a variety of genres and on a range of subjects. To learn to read and write arguments is to learn that there is more to short prose discourse than the personal, familiar essay.

Beene and Douglas’ Argument and Analysis falls into the general cate­gory of readers on argument. A substantial volume, it contains over sixty essays on various subjects, including a number of essays by student writers responding to issues raised by the professionals. The readings are grouped into eight sections on education, dissent, business ethics, gender and culture, literary analysis, environmental issues, science, and the arts. The volume is introduced by a fifty-page unit on critical reading, critical thinking, and persuasive writing, and it ends with a chapter on writing the research paper and a glossary of terms. The structure and proportion of the book indicate that  it is meant to function as an anthology rather than a rhetoric, to be used in conjunction with a fuller rhetoric if the instructor wants to elaborate on the I principles that govern reading, thinking about, and writing arguments.

As a collection of essays, the volume has some strengths. It contains a substantial number of selections that have not been over-anthologized, and the familiar selections are good ones that work in many contexts. The authors have searched out appealing selections. There are some fresh essays and a stimulating mixture of genres and points of view in the sections on business ethics, on gender and culture, and on controversies in the sciences. I especially like the contrast of Robert Thomas’ “Is Corporate Executive Compensation Excessive?” with the more familiar Benjamin Franklin essay opposing the payment of salaries to employees of the executive branch of government. The gender and culture section contains contemporary material as well as Pearl Buck’s 1937 essay, “America’s Gunpowder Women,” which makes an interesting commentary on Dorothy Parker’s “Good Souls” and exposes the reader to earlier stances taken in the debate over gender and cultural roles. In the science section, Stephen Jay Gould’s defense of dinosaur intelligence in “Were Dinosaurs Dumb?” raises questions about the definition of intelligence that are answered rather differently in James Gould and Carol Gould’s “Can a Bee Behave Intelligently?” The authors have also made good selections in the literary analysis section, where many of the short stories raise issues related to those discussed in the essays. One could certainly develop a number of writing assignments based on analysis and response to the essays in this volume.

One could not, however, get much useful direction on how to teach argument and analysis from this book. There are two places to look for such direction: in the “Introduction to Reading, Thinking, and Writing” at the front of the volume and in the discussion questions that follow each essay. Both fall short of meeting the needs of teachers and students. The discussion question tend to be brief and sketchy and show no trace of a rhetorical perspective o’ the essays. The ones on content ask for little besides summary and basic comprehension, and the ones on presentation do not reflect any clear assumptions about argument and critical thinking that students are expected to apply to the essays they read. Unfortunately, the notion of argument presented both in the apparatus and in the introduction is neither vet sophisticated nor consistently developed. It consists mostly of the standard treatment: a discussion of induction, deduction, and logical fallacies both formal and informal. None of the advice offered about critical reading persuasive writing is related to any clearly articulated notion of argument the structures and permeates the book. Here, in a book called Argument an Analysis, one finds no trace of the influence of Toulmin or Perelman or an recent research on argument; the authors offer some discussion (confusing’ and misleading) of the syllogism, but they do not even mention the enthymeme or the example. They present standard definitions of induction deduction, and fallacy, but they never even attempt to use the questions on the essays to relate any of these concepts to the readings. The chapter on the research paper could have come from any reader; it has nothing to do with writing arguments. It is as if the authors took an anthology of reading grouped by subject matter and added an introductory section discussion argument as a branch of logic.

To meet the needs of courses that emphasize argument in the teaching writing, an anthology needs to do three things. First, it must collect son lively and intelligent selections, good arguments that interact with each of the in ways that will stimulate student response; this book does that. Second. should be structured and presented so that it can be used easily. That mea that the apparatus should demonstrate how to treat the selections as argument for purposes of both analysis and invention. This book does not, and it h some other problems that also interfere with its usefulness, including a truly embarrassing preface directed to students that is guaranteed to make anyone cringe. (This preface was not written by the authors.) Finally, a good read should reflect the current state of opinion on its subject. Not every reader’ argument needs to offer an original perspective on the subject, but it should embody a thoughtful, accurate synthesis of existing attitudes. Many other readers do this job more effectively.

 
   
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