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The Things That Go Without Saying in Composition Studies:
A Colloquy
Introduction
Linda K. Shamoon and Robert A. Schwegler
If anything about composition is overdetermined, it
is the process paradigm, where every question can be answered and every
problem makes sense. In the move to make composition studies a legitimate
discipline, research on composing began to inform practice while it also
drew for us portraits of ‘typical student writers that have influenced
the ways we see our own students.
- Nedra Reynolds
This statement by Nedra Reynolds, which opens the first
position paper in this colloquy, identifies a number of the “things”
which drive composition studies, including the process paradigm, the
search for legitimacy, and our constructed pictures of “informed” practice.
Other position papers identify additional elements: reading as interpretation,
teachers’ and students’ authority in the classroom, ownership of texts,
students as writers, and the belletristic tradition. These position
papers, which were first aired at a conference entitled A Critique of
the Things That Go Without Saying in Composition Studies, bring together
in one conversation a challenge to the major interests, practices, and
values that constitute and determine composition studies.1
In recapturing the provocative interactions of the conference, many
of us started to think of composition studies as an “overdetermined
system,” a concept from the sciences and the social sciences with rich
implications for our reading of composition studies as a set of hegemonic
discourse practices that ties the field to the social formation of the
professional middle class. From this perspective, we present this collection
of position papers as a critical account of the discipline.
Viewing composition studies as an overdetermined system turns our attention
to its complexity—to the relationships among its multiple entities,
to its inherent tensions and contradictions, to the internal changes
and adaptations which allow overall survival of the system, to its manifestations
at particular times and in specific contexts, and to its particular
social formations. Reynolds, for example, lays bare the connections
and contradictions among early process research, Romantic assumptions
about writers and writing, and composition as a middle class enterprise.
Linda K. Shamoon examines the connections between the assumptions of
process researchers and the outcomes of their research, outcomes that,
although contradictory, have entitled the behavioral model of process
to be applied to any writing situation. Thus, these position papers
begin to point out how our assumptions, practices, positions, theories,
and research activities comprise an overdetermined system, one that
is constituted by often contradictory elements which are nonetheless
articulated and interlocked in ways that produce a recognizable effect
and are in turn (re)constituted by that effect.
Of course, it makes no sense to talk about the elements of composition
studies as an overdetermined system without talking about how these
are both produced by and produce a specific social formation—that of
the professional middle class—whose emergence has been traced by numerous
studies of the rise of professionalism in American life, culture, and
education. The position papers by Judith Goleman and John Trimbur suggest
that a recognition of the emerging dominance of the professional middle
class is central to an understanding of composition practices and ideologies,
just as recognition of the dominance of corporate and industrial formations
is important to an understanding of current-traditional practices, as
Richard Ohmann has pointed out.
At the same time, while exploring this formation, all of the authors
identify and critique unstated assumptions—principles and rules in composition
studies that are so widely accepted they are in effect “invisible.”
This invisibility is, in part, the result of hegemonic operations which,
according to Gramsci, entail the permeation of an ideology or “vision
of things as they are” into the way people perceive the events of their
everyday lives. Robert A. Schwegler challenges the invisible notion
that writing is synonymous with meaning-making. He argues that this
unstated assumption is intertwined with values and practices that both
come from and ensure the dominance of the professional middle class,
while having the effect of devaluing many types of business and professional
writing. Beverly Wall questions the classroom predilection for personal
writing and suggests an alternative practice, one based in a wider appreciation
of public discourse and rhetorical genres.
In order to examine composition studies, the authors found that they
must examine it materially, as historically situated and as manifested
in particular forms of research and practice serving to preserve the
power relations of the system. Thus, the position papers presented here
turn our attention to practice as constituted in particular places by
“researched” findings and teaching methods. Roxanne Mountford, for example,
looks at the current emphasis on teaching “community” in composition
studies and concludes that this method contradicts the democratic processes
it is supposed to mimic. She illustrates the material result of this
tension with examples from classes and suggests that an alternate pedagogy,
the teaching of culture, breaks the cycle of masculine/professional
hegemony.
In these ways, then, all of the position papers in this colloquy are
theoretically informed, using theory to give a specific name and habitation
to things we have felt about composition studies. At the same time,
these position papers are the work of practitioners who want to alter
and redirect practice, not the work of theorists for whom practice has
a secondary value. Theory allows us to intervene in current practice
with the aim of changing it, not simply critiquing it. We also want
to confront contradictions in our notion of an overdetermined system,
for we share the assumption of most critical theorists that by laying
bare the things that go without saying in composition studies we can
change our discourse/practices rather than contribute to the next adaptation.
This collection, therefore, includes counterpoints, a series of statements
from colleagues such as Marjorie Roemer, who warns us not to repudiate
our recent history lest we repeat the kind of parochialism which is
the target of our critique. Linda Peterson points out that in an earlier
configuration of the system personal writing did form a public, marked
practice. Lynn Z. Bloom explains that undergraduate education has always
been affected by multiple agendas, especially in terms of the indoctrination
of students. Finally, Robert J. Connors cautions us that theory and
critique have not dramatically changed practice. With these counterpoints
we remind ourselves of Ben Agger’s insight that, “We have a long way
to go before we can use a genuinely critical discourse unproblematically”
(15).
University of Rhode Island
Kingston, Rhode Island
Note
1 The conference, A Critique of the Things That Go Without
Saying in Composition Studies, co-sponsored by the University of Rhode
Island and Trinity College (Connecticut), was held on June 16,1994,
at the W. Alton Jones Campus of the University of Rhode Island.
Process Research: Portraits of Student Writers
Nedra Reynolds
If anything about composition is overdetermined, it
is the process paradigm, where every question can be answered and every
problem makes sense. In the move to make composition studies a legitimate
discipline, research on composing began to inform practice while it
also drew for us portraits of “typical” student writers that have influenced
the ways we see our own students.
A dominant question of process has been “How do writers write?” It
is arguable that over the last three decades more research projects
have been dedicated to answering that question than any other. The major
assumption driving much of this research is that one can observe the
composing process, to quote Sondra Perl, “as it unfolds”—that composing
aloud to researchers externalizes an internal phenomenon (320). In the
effort to make internal processes accessible, however, the external
realities under which students compose were often ignored or overlooked.
The writing self that emerges in two early process research studies
reproduces composition’s identity as a middle-class enterprise and leaves
unexamined the function of difference.
Janet Emig’s portrait of Lynn creates a compelling subjectivity of
the student writer that served to condemn current-traditional practices
while it also reproduced composition’s own middle-class identity and
affiliations. Because Lynn is a model student—in the top five percent
of her class academically; in advanced placement as well as college
courses; active in organizations; holding a part-time job—her case takes
on a particular urgency (45). Here we have a wonderful, engaging student
whose enthusiasm and creativity are about to be choked by rule-obsessed
teachers, ignorant about how real writers work (98). It is precisely
Lynn’s position as the all-American high school student that makes this
profile so powerful and enduring; educators are particularly alarmed
that a student like Lynn—raised by a teacher and a lawyer—might not
be ready for college writing or might actually have been harmed by her
school instruction.
In keeping with the image of the good student, Lynn is cooperative
and able to provide a thorough documentation of her past writing. Emig
reports that Lynn proved an “exceptionally interesting subject because
of her self-knowledge and her ability to verbalize the process of thinking
and writing” (45-46). Emig further characterizes Lynn as “an extremely
poised, assured, and open writer” with an “ego-strength” that allows
Lynn to tackle any writing task with confidence and enough skill to
please any evaluator (63-64). What writing teacher, in reading this
profile, wouldn’t long for more Lynns in her classes?
Emig presents Lynn consistently as an intelligent, perceptive, and
articulate student whose concern with teacher-imposed rules and regulations
has stunted her artistic growth. The writing self, in this view, is
naturally creative; it comes out of a Romantic version of artistic production
(Berlin, Rhetoric and Reality; Brodkey). Lynn could be an extremely
gifted writer if it were not for the stultifying environment in which
she is asked to produce texts. If she had been left alone to develop
naturally as a writer, or, better yet, if she had been nurtured and
supported and invited to write with emotion, Lynn would be a “healthier”
person, not haunted by a humiliating spelling error (70). Institutionalized
writing practices become the enemy, and Lynn is written as an heroic
struggling artist.
Sondra Perl’s “The Composing Processes of Unskilled College Writers”
focuses on Tony, who provides a striking contrast to Lynn. Tony is a
twenty-year old first-generation college student, a high school dropout
and exMarine, labeled a “non-traditional” student as Lynn never would
have been. He is Puerto Rican, a native speaker of English, who also
speaks Spanish though he does not read or write it. Above all, Tony
is considered an unskilled writer whose “educational background is characterized
by instability” (75): five different schools in the first four grades;
he was held back one year, expelled another, and finally dropped out.
Unlike Lynn, who sits on her basement floor surrounded by notebooks
full of her writing, Tony has no written work from previous school days
and “it is clear that he prefers not to recall academic experiences
from those days in the past” (78-79). Also unlike Lynn, Tony cannot
imagine writing about emotions or putting personal things on paper.
Contrasted to Lynn’s investment in writing as expression, Tony wants
to improve his writing for utilitarian purposes: “Sometimes you can’t
talk, can’t use the phone, so you have to write—like a businessman,
you sound educated on paper”’ (78). Tony may not be in the middle class—his
mother doesn’t speak English and his father attended school only until
the third grade—but he, along with Mina Shaughnessy’s students, clearly
recognizes the path to middle-class subjectivity through college writing
skills.
Tony’s ethnicity, bilingualism, and family background do not change
Perl’s diagnosis; in her concluding statements, Tony could be anybody,
and teachers who intervene to untangle “the tangles in the process”
need not acknowledge or struggle with the social and cultural factors
that make him an “unskilled writer” (Perl 328). As Stephen North puts
it, “who the subjects are finally tends to be treated as accidental:
Emig’s Lynn may be vivacious, Perl’s Tony separated from his wife and
child, and soon, but these properties of them as subjects end up not
impinging on their composing processes” (217). By following a case study
method borrowed from social science and by zeroing in on only a handful
of writers, these studies delineate writing process, for any type of
writing, as they also attempt to construct a writer, free from
any specificities of gender, race, class, or material conditions.
In the eight years between these two studies, we can also see researchers
moving away from Emig’s brand of humanistic, literary interpretation
and more towards Perl’s type of coding and counting (see Miller, Textual
Carnivals 119-20). However, it is not Pen’s “objectivity” but our
own subject positions that make Tony an unmemorable character compared
to Lynn. Most writing teachers do not see themselves in Tony. Most of
us are Lynns: successful in school, eager writers, classic teacher-pleasers,
with lots of self-sponsored writing. Emig’s construction of Lynn, therefore,
reinscribes the class positions of her readers and perhaps tells some
of our own stories—the frustration of having our writing appropriated
or misinterpreted by teachers or the drudgery of school-sponsored writing.
Open admissions students, basic writers, or first-generation college
students are much harder to “captune” as Emig does so vividly with Lynn,
in pant because if we are not Puerto Rican, a high school dropout, or
a first-generation college student, we may feel uneasy interpreting
and assigning meaning or intent.
Tony’s differences, as well as his frank admission of his reasons for
wanting to write better, make us uncomfortable. Composition is still
reluctant to acknowledge the obvious reasons why students take writing
courses: they want to get ahead, get a good job, be considered literate,
be a middle-class member of society. Research has not responded adequately
to this reality of teaching writing.
In early research on composing, the goal of discovering a lockstep,
foolproof composing process subsumed other concerns and reduced difference
to a limited set of categories—expert, novice, skilled, unskilled—with
very little questioning of who might or might not belong to these categories,
or where they might break down. This simplistic treatment of difference
is particularly troubling from a poststructuralist view of subjectivity,
which challenges us to concentrate precisely on gaps and contradictions
and to resist the temptation to assign universality or find common ground
everywhere we look. Until such scholars as Lester Faigley, Susan Miller,
and John Clifford began to attend to issues of subjectivity and ideology
in composition studies, the consequences of process research went without
saying. These writers, however, are beginning to say something of crucial
importance: that composition is invested in reproducing good little
subjects of modernism and capitalism who know how to follow the rules.
While it may be true, as Robert J. Connors points out, that process
research has died out while process pedagogy lives on, I still believe
that the landmark studies by early process researchers have shaped the
ways we see our own students; it is easy to divide student writers into
the Lynns (well-prepared and eager) and the Tonys (a challenge) without
complicating those divisions or without, for example, seeing Tony as
inexperienced but practical and realistic.
Alternative research methods—especially ethnographic—are undeniably
more expensive and time-consuming, but we must identify different research
questions that force us to confront the multiple, complex, and material
realities of writing (who has access to computers? whose homes are not
full of books?) while they would also elicit more voices like Tony’s,
whose honesty illuminates composition’s investments in reproducing middle-class
subjects. Instead of “how” writers write, better questions might arise
from concentrating on writers’ locations and situatedness: Who writes?
And when? What factors or conditions stimulate or shape the writing?
Where do writers write—in terms of physical space—and where do they
get their material? Perhaps most importantly, who doesn’t get to write—and
why?
University of Rhode Island
Kingston, Rhode Island
Changing our Discipline by Challenging the Universality of the Behavioral
Model of Process
Linda K. Shamoon
One thing that goes without saying in the process-oriented
classroom is that the behavioral model of ‘‘explore—draft—revise” universally
frames any writing task. Donald M. Murray puts it this way: “If we stand
back to look at the writing process, we see the writer following the
writing through the three stages of rehearsing, drafting, and revising
as the piece of work—essay, story, article, poem, research paper, play,
letter, scientific report, business memorandum, novel, television script—moves
toward its own meaning” (4). By now, however, there has been a wide
ranging critique of this model, from a thorough deconstruction of its
underlying research methods (Cooper and Holzman; Dobrin; Pemberton;
Geisler) to more theoretical attacks from numerous scholars representing,
according to Lester Faigley, various formations of “the social view”
(“Competing Theories” 534-37). In this short paper I intend to add to
this critique by looking closely at a representative piece of process
research to show that its ideological context completely constrains
its conclusions. At the same time, I want to join Michael Pemberton
in pleading not guilty to “carping at the cognitivists” as an end in
itself (52).My purposes are to make a case for contextual rather than
universal models of process and to argue that such a shift has the potential
to create dramatic changes in the conduct of our discipline.
A close look at one example of a respected piece of process research
demonstrates how the tacit agreement to abide by a set of research methods
and assumptions ties the researcher into a web of interpretation that
may have little to do with the empirical data found during the execution
of the research process. In the landmark article, “The Composing Processes
of an Engineer,” Jack Selzer “adopted and adapted methods” of process
research to lay bare the composing habits of a professional engineer
(178). After assembling and examining in scrupulous detail an enormous
amount of data, Selzer interprets and squeezes the data into the existing
process paradigm by rationalizing both the internal inconsistencies
of the data and their blatant contradictions with the process paradigm.
For example, in one of his first conclusions, Selzer says the evidence
shows that his subject “writes alone”; just two paragraphs later, however,
Selzer reports that engineers do “group brainstorming,” that their audiences
have a constraining presence during invention and arrangement, and that
the language, writings, and graphics of coworkers shape the emerging
document (184-85). Clearly, only in the physical sense is Selzer’s subject
alone when he writes. Second, Selzer observes that his subject composes
sequentially, moving from invention to arrangement to drafting and then
to editing in a linear fashion. This observation, however, contradicts
the accepted process paradigm of recursive composing habits;
Selzer works around this finding by calling for an adjustment of process
teaching for engineering students (185). Finally, Seizer ignores his
own empirical data which show that his subject does not revise (184-85).
Even in the face of these “results,” which contradict the dominant process
paradigm, Seizer concludes, “The most striking thing about Nelson’s
composing habits is how closely they approximate the habits of professional
writers and skilled academics whose composing processes have been studied
by other researchers” (184). Prior belief in the paradigm rather than
the data drives this conclusion.
By this analysis, I do not want to imply that Seizer conducted bad
research or that his research was inconsequential. In fact, as Selzer
pointed out in 1983, “Little work has been done on the composing strategies
of people who call themselves engineers or scientists ... “(178). Indeed,
it was timely for Selzer to see technical writing through the lens of
process; studies like his helped many of us more completely understand
specific aspects of technical writing. At the same time, the contradictions
in his research undermine his “striking” conclusion. In fact, an alternate
paradigm, Faigley’s social view, allows other explanations to emerge:
“The focus of the social view of writing... is not on how the social
situation influences the individual, but on how the individual is a
constituent of culture” (“Competing Theories” 535). From this
point of view, culture establishes a set of discursive practices which
provide some options (fairly well-bounded options) for writers, speakers,
and thinkers. Culture provides the language, the texts, the authorities
and the framework for processing the world.2
The given language is the means of processing experience,
recalling memories, communicating information, etc. If the culture
does not provide a word for an experience or image, the image may
go unseen.
The vehicles for teaching, reinforcing or extending the cultural
vision of reality are chosen and privileged by the culture. Such vehicles
include stories, lore, canonical texts, and doctrine, among many other
things, which serve to confirm ways of seeing, to establish connections
among experiences and concepts, to rehearse organizations of knowledge,
and to affirm the bases of beliefs and values.
The members of the culture look to authorities whose statements shape
the issues, and whose interpretations of accepted and new sources
of information or knowledge either elaborate or extend this material
in ways that protect the culture. Authorities may be particularly
adept at resolving the contradictions to the cultural vision that
arise from new sources of information or from the challenges of new
material conditions.
The members of the culture “discourse” with each other (or even interiorly
with themselves) when they write, speak, or think—setting limits on
topics, discursive styles, and on accepted areas of agreements and
disagreements. Such discourse may challenge aspects of the culture
or even its overall behaviors and assumptions, but it also usually
reifies essential values of the culture itself, often by articulating
the differences between the members’ cultural vision and others’ ways
of seeing and expression.
In this model, culture provides the language, the
vehicles of discourse, and the bounded possibilities for discursive
practice.3 Any individual speaking, writing, or thinking
within the culture is, thus, constituted by it.
From this paradigm it is possible to build a different interpretation
of the meaning of Selzer’s data. This alternative interpretation, first,
might identify the communally established discourse topics, roles, tasks
and activities in order to see how these situate Selzer’s subject, the
technical writer Nelson. Within this construct, the alternative interpretation
might list the actual writing activities of this engineer at this firm,
a list that includes referencing previous documents, enumerating reader
expectations, and engaging in collegial conversation. In these ways,
the alternative interpretation shows how this engineer’s discourse community
constrains his writing process, and it resolves troubling contradictions
that are present in the research itself. As an example, consider this
excerpt from Selzer’s original “Conclusions and Discussion,” followed
by an alternative reading.
The most striking thing about Nelson’s composing habits
is how closely they approximate the habits of the professional writers
and skilled academic writers whose composing processes have been studied
by other researchers. Nelson writes alone, not as part of a team. Except
for the most common memos and correspondence, he spends as much time
planning as many professional writers, despite the pressures and time
limitations imposed on him at work. He invents content in detail and
through various schemata of invention. He arranges material carefully.
He consciously shapes style. His composing process always includes a
distinct if brief revision stage. (Seizer 184)
Here is how an alternative interpretation might
read:
The most striking thing about Nelson’s composing habits
is howthoroughlycontextualized they are by the given conditions, discourse,
and language of his profession and company. In a physical sense Nelson
writes alone, but in every other way he writes as part of this professional
team. Even for the most common memos and correspondence, Nelson’s writing
is in response to and constrained by his clients, by conversation with
his colleagues and other specialists, by the conventions of his company,
and by the content and structures of earlier reports. He draws on these
conversations, expectations and conventions to provide detail for prospectuses,
technical reports, and other texts. Since these documents have fairly
predictable parts that Nelson knows very well, he is able to establish
detailed outlines before writing a draft. Thus the context, conventional
structures, and language of this writing are familiar enough to Nelson
that he is able to write linearly rather than recursively, and to produce
text that is ready for editing rather than for revising.
Such an alternative conclusion springs just as
easily from the data presented in Selzer’s journal article, especially
from those data which seem to contradict the recursive, revision-oriented
activities in the behavioral process model of the writer writing alone.
For some readers, the alternative conclusion may be as compelling as
Seizer’s conclusion.
From a broader perspective, the alternative interpretation reveals
the extent to which Selzer’s research—and all research, including empirical
research—is based on acts of interpretation. In other words, the empirical
research that produced the behavioral model of the writing process included
acts of interpretation and narrative that could only have come from
that community. Granted, these acts of interpretation and constructions
of narrative were extremely important to all of us working in composition
studies at that time; however, these acts of interpretation were representations
of reality rather than reality itself, and they were determined by the
context from which they emerged.
Our disciplinary task, then, is not to “unproblematically reject” process
theory, research, and pedagogy, as Faigley warns us not to do (“Competing
Theories” 537),but to understand that the act of composing is contextualized
by the discourse community within which it occurs. The topics, roles,
tasks, and activities of the writing process are not universal, unless
we formulate the behavioral model in terms so generalized that the model
is without applicable specificity. Instead, the topics, roles, tasks,
and activities of the writer are given specific shape by the local discourse
of which it is a part. Culture shapes the writing process.
Robert J. Connors asks how this central assertion of the social view
alters what we do in our research and classrooms (Address). First, Carl
G. Herndl points out, “There has been a great deal of work in the past
few years devoted to the social and political nature of writing” by
scholars such as Charles Bazerman, Greg Myers, Lucille McCarthy, Carolyn
R. Miller and numerous others who already examine, “ ... the relationship
between written discourse and the professional, organizational, or disciplinary
communities established by discourse, which in turn give that discourse
meaning and legitimacy” (350-51). Writers like Herndl, Patricia Bizzell,
and John Trimbur are concerned with the ideological and political contexts
of composing and the reproduction of cultural power. Thus, much writing
research is already concerned with how specific academic and professional
communities constitute themselves and how their writing specifically
“enables and limits thinking” (Myers 597). Second, in the writing
classroom many practitioners are experimenting and suggesting ways to
drive a composition course based on this research and theory. James
A. Berlin calls for the teaching of dialectical thinking (“Poststructuralism”);
Roxanne Mountford (in one of the following position papers) and the
numerous contributors to Cultu ral Studies in the English Classroomcall
for the teaching of culture (Berlin and Vivion); Herndl, drawing on
Trimbur, advocates a pedagogy of resistance that takes shape in teaching
a rhetoric of dissensus, and so on. All of these practitioners have
changed the teaching of writing because of the social view.
We at the University of Rhode Island are experimenting with “topicaiization”
as a method by which a whole class reenacts how a discourse community
claims its topic and establishes hegemony over content, process, and
product. In one class, for example, students are presented with a topic
that is so normalized in our culture it appears on the surface to be
a non-topic, as if there is no place or reason to take a stand. (The
topic of “cosmetics” is one such topic.) Nevertheless, students are
urged to raise questions about the topic and to search for answers.
As they do so, students find they are immediately pulled into the various
discourse communities that provide “interested” and contradictory answers.
Furthermore, since each group of students has been pulled into a different
discourse community, each uses different language and writes different
kinds of papers about the topic. Thus, a class which started by speaking
in one voice now becomes “multicultural” in terms of its varieties of
topical discourse. (On the topic of cosmetics, one group wrote a marketing
analysis, for example, another wrote a cultural critique of cosmetics
advertising, while another wrote an argument against animal testing.)
Predictably, these groups sometimes clash over their representations
of the topic, but by tracking these clashes and contradictions throughout
the semester, and by pointing out the distances created among the groups,
students begin to understand how a discourse community claims a topic
and specifies the roles, writing processes, and products of its members.
Students also gain a wider critical perspective on our culture by seeing
how a “rich” topic remains hidden as a non-topic, and by asking who
and what are served by such invisibility. Thus, topicalization enables
students to understand the “the ideological development of discourse”
and “the cultural consequences of a dominant discourse or the alternate
understandings it excludes” (Herndl 351).
What difference does this make to our discipline? The answer begins,
first, with a reminder that although drafting continues in classrooms
driven by the social view, this does not mean there has not been a paradigm
shift. To the contrary, in our research and our classrooms the study
of process emerges from an immersion in topics, content, and context,
and the particular process studied depends upon that context. Second,
and consequently, if topic, context, and content, followed by process,
drive a writing class, then that class is a rhetoric class concerned
with (as Nedra Reynolds points out) what is being written, by
whom, for whom, and when as often as it is concerned
with how. Third, and consequently, these kinds of rhetoric classes could
constitute a rhetoric program (a program that was once a composition
program) that offers basic and advanced courses in the study of public
discourse in all areas. Finally, and consequently, such a rhetoric program
would no longer be the stepchild of a department; it could be a program
with its own place in the culture of the academy.
University of Rhode Island
Kingston, Rhode Island
Notes
2 Here, I describe a “strong” version of the relationship
between culture, expression, and language; not all discourse communities
are this tightly bounded.
3 This discussion of how culture and context constrain expression
is often criticized as being too determinist and depressing, because
it seems to imprison expression and to deny room for individuality and
creativity. On the contrary, however, the existence of a strong set
of discourse practices creates legitimate, even protected spaces for
a full exploration of the ideas and concerns that are of interest to
the members of that discourse community. Composition studies, for example,
created and maintained legitimate space for interested members, such
as Seizer, to explore and express themselves. Composition studies grew
by determining its own way of seeing and talking about writing (the
process paradigm); by establishing its own pantheon of authorities (Emig,
Murray, Elbow, Flower and Hayes, Sommers, and Seizer, among others);
and by providing innumerable opportunities for members to discourse
with each other, especially in order to clarify their differences from
other determining visions (especially the “current-traditional” vision
which John Trimbur maintains was an invented opposition). The twenty-five
year outpouring of articles, texts, syllabuses, and classroom practices
enlarged and helped to legitimate the community’s own methodological
assumptions and its own compilation of compelling data and texts. These
are part of the things that ‘prove” that composition studies exists.
Limits of a Postmodern Critique: We Too Are Situated (Counterpoint)
Marjorie Roemer
These position papers seem to analyze a field shaped
by modernist thought from the vantage point of a later, postmodern perspective.
Many of them fault a past history of individualism (with its Romantic
emphasis on the self in isolation, on the personal) in light of the
present ascendancy of social constructionism in contemporary thought.
More specifically, Nedra Reynolds and Linda K. Shamoon, as well as Robert
A. Schwegler and Beverly Wall (see position papers below), look at modernist
attention to the development of the singular writer in isolation, the
individual process of composing, the interpretation of intended, volitional
meanings, the expressive voice of the personal essay, and find this
attention limited, suspect, deficient in social and cultural awareness.
I understand the desire to amend this individualist past and to critique
its complicity with the development of a capitalist middle class for
whom individualism is a useful ideological tool (one that the middle
class uses and is used by). But I question what seems to me to be naive:
the idea that we might move into a realm where our philosophies and
our commitments were not themselves overdetermined, a place from which
we could launch an unproblematic critical discourse.
If we have learned to contextualize, to read others as situated readers
and writers, we must never forget that we too are situated. One of the
contemporary critiques of modernism is that the modernists tended to
see themselves as the logical culmination of the progression of past
ages; the humanist, universalizing impulse of the modernist program
named itself the apogee of history. It is especially inappropriate for
postmodernist thinkers to carry on this tradition, to fail to historicize
ourselves and the subjects of our critique.
For theorists of postmodernism this is a central issue: the problematics
of critique from within a system, the necessity to read ourselves into
history, not out of it. We, too, act in an overdetermined system; we,
too, are subject to and subjects of institutions within a cultural context.
The problem for the postmodernist who believes in the social constructionist
paradigm is to find the space for human agency within so determined
a system. And if we wish to do this, we cannot dissolve entirely the
personal voice, the transformative potential of individual consciousness.
What this means in effect is that we must salvage certain elements of
the modernist program in our new postmodern formulations. Henry Giroux
puts it this way:
At stake here is the issue of retaining modernism’s
commitment to critical reason, agency, and the power of human beings
to overcome human suffering. Modernism reminds us of the importance
of constructing a discourse that is ethical, historical, and political.
At the same time postmodernism provides a powerful challenge to all
totalizing discourses, places an important emphasis on the contingent
and the specific, and provides a new theoretical language for developing
a politics of difference. (73)
So, I am uncomfortable with a postmodern critique of the past of composition
that fails to historicize that past and fails to understand its strengths
and how we can build on them. The self-avowed postmodern author, John
Barth, said, “My ideal postmodernist author neither merely repudiates
nor merely imitates either his twentieth-century modernist parents
or his nineteenth-century pre-modernist grandparents. He has the first
half of our century under his belt, but not on his back” (52).
I would urge us to have our early history under our belts but not on
our backs, to go forward without imagining that our present lenses for
seeing invalidate entirely what was seen before or preclude new ways
of seeing that will inevitably modify our present perceptions.
Rhode Island College
Providence, Rhode Island
Meaning and Interpretation
Robert A. Schwegler
For most of this century, the distinguishing activity
of literary scholars and the basis for prestige and reward has been
the production of critical texts that identify the meanings of other
texts (literary and cultural). Despite changes in critical fashion,
the practice of literary interpretation has remained both relatively
stable and has dominated the study of literature. For traditional (or
thematic-formalist) criticism, the central concern is the presentation
or construction of textual meaning, defined broadly and loosely to include
not only leading ideas (themes, perspective) but also a wide variety
of relationships and responses—in short, meaning encompasses whatever
intentions the writer has for a text or informed readers can discover
in the text itself (Juhl 45-52). It is the task of critical reading
and interpretation to make statements about such meaning (Juhl 3-15).
Though they present significant challenges to such a view, poststructuralism
and postmodernism also operate within frameworks that specify processes
of meaning making and interpretation. For many poststructuralists, texts,
acts of reading, and discursive practices in general are characterized
by their interpretive possibilities, by the range they give to the construction
of multiple (often indeterminate) readings. In theoretical formulations,
words like “interpretative possibilities” and “interpretive perspective”
often take the place of traditional terms like “meaning,” “theme,” or
“organizing principle.” As Stanley Fish explains, “communications of
every kind are characterized by exactly the same conditions—the necessity
of interpretive work, the unavoidability of perspective, and the construction
by acts of interpretation of that which supposedly grounds interpretation,
intentions, characters, and pieces of the world” (“Conformists” 43-44).
A similar substitution takes place in postmodernism where “representation,”
“strategies of representation,” and related terms are used to identify
the significant features or relationships of texts and cultures and
to define the space or difference that makes interpretation a necessary
act. Jon Stratton tells us that:
In representation we understand that something stands
in for something else. The idea of representation, for us, is founded
on the inability of the two somethings to be the same to be identical..
. . The problem of representation is best understood in terms of the
‘standing in,’ the ‘sending’. It is the moment between the two entities,
the presence and the representation, which allows us to talk of presence
and representation. (10)
Though these theoretical formulations differ, all the approaches have
in common a reliance on reductive strategies of interpretation. In each,
to “read” or to “interpret” is, generally, to produce statements epitomizing
the propositional content of a work, its theme, perspective, focus,
intent, design, discontinuities, or representational practices; or it
is to create parallel accounts that highlight the system of ideas, relationships,
interpretive strategies, or representations organizing a work by assigning
equivalencies between it and some other system of thought—in effect
allegorizing a work and producing, for example, a Marxist reading or
a Lacanian reading. The prevalence of these reductive practices is evident
in the ubiquitous paraphrases that reduce a work to its propositional
content, as in Eve Kosofsky Sedgwick’s reading of Willa Cather’s “Paul’s
Secret”: “Paul’s teachers feel humiliated because they have found themselves
momentarily unified in a ritual of scapegoating, without being at all
clear what it is in the scapegoat that deserves torment or even what
provokes this sudden communical structuration” (168). It is evident,
too, in the repetition of verbal formulas like “What X is saying is
.. .“ and “In the case of X... “that announce an interpretive “translation”:
“By this Derrida means that, even in the original moment of production,
his is an interpreted presence.. .“ (Fish, “Conformists” 46); “In ‘The
Secret Agent’ the truth is guaranteed by the state and its power. In
the postmodern spy novel, however—some of Le Carr’s later novels such
a A Perfect Spy, are moving towards this position—the state no
longer guarantees truth although it may claim to” (Stratton 288). Allegorical
readings generally use phrases that identify parallels, “in the same
way,” or that announce restatements, “that is,” as in the following
passage by Ronald Schleifer:
Heart of Darkness enacts the act of signification
in Marlow’s understanding—his interpretation—of Kurtz’s last works:
it enacts meaning in relation to death. In the same way, the therapist
faces the patient with death—with silence, like the silence of Marlow’s
Africa, “great, expectant mute, while the man jabbered about himself”
That is, the therapist, as Lacan says, “cadaverizes” his position, and
in the analytic situation “he makes death present” (195)
To suggest that in practice literary interpretation produces statements
of propositional content or assigns equivalent meanings seems to undermine
the often lofty claims made for literary scholarship. But the contradiction
between broad claims about meaning or representation and specific, reductive
practices can be seen as part of an overdetermined system, one that
highlights the contribution of specific interpreters while disguising
the reductive nature of their practices with broad claims for the value
of interpretive practice in general. The growth of professionalism
over the last century and the emergence of academics, lawyers, and other
intellectuals as a dominant social formation has led to the increasing
economic and social importance of people whose work is the production
of knowledge and who are concerned with “the discursive rules that safeguard
the property value of their knowledge-power” (Ross 123). In a scholarly
work, a phrase like “what Eliot is conveying here is... “not only points
to the text being interpreted but also highlights the interpretation
itself, identifying it as a commodity produced by the work of the interpreter.
I want to suggest that similar forces are at play in composition scholarship
and pedagogy. While this is not to argue that the close institutional
and disciplinary relationships of literary and composition studies cause
these similarities, it is to point out the likelihood of significant
influence from literary study to composition—an ongoing influence maintained
by contemporary scholarship (see Sotirou). With literary scholarship,
composition (as presently constituted) shares a belief in the centrality
of meaning and in the close association of reading, interpretation,
and meaning. What I argue is that in limiting the range and nature of
meaning-making and interpretive activities in writing, these and other
corollaries encourage the development of discursive strategies, relationships,
and subject positions associated with a particular social formation.
In addition, I suggest that the apparent contradictions between the
broad principles and the restrictive practices are one of the clues
to understanding the operation of composition as an overdetermined,
socially formative (or reproductive) system.
Viewing writing and reading as meaning-centered, interpretive activities
seems natural for composition teachers and scholars. We ground discussions
of composition instruction in theory that, as Edward White puts it,
“brings reading and writing together as parallel acts, both of them
consisting of the making of meaning: the writer seeks to make meaning
out of experience, while the readers seeks to make meaning out of a
text” (97). We design empirical research to isolate meaning-making and
meaning-constructing behaviors (Greece). We create composition pedagogies
that encourage interpretive exploration of experience, knowledge, and
others’ texts (see, for example, Elbow and Belanoff 107-09, 160-64,
286-99).
Despite challenges to other “givens” of composition like definitions
of selfhood, patterns of gendering, and a heavily academic focus (see
Luns ford, Gere), assumptions about the meaning-making, interpretive
character of writing continue to be treated as simple and obvious principles
for composition research, theory, and pedagogy (see Flower, Geisler).
Their obviousness and simplicity are deceptive, however. In practice,
the broad view of composing as an interpretation of experience and a
construction of meaning comes with a complex set of corollaries—an entailed
cluster of concepts and practices. For the most part, these corollaries
privilege specific, even propositional meaning in texts; they foreground
the writer’s perspective, interpretations, and control over textual
meaning, and they give precedence to genres and composing practices
that highlight the writer’s role as interpreter.
Often, even in progressive pedagogies, broad conceptions of writing
as the discovery of insight (“When we write we compose meanings. . .
. we become more potent thinkers and active learners” [Axelrod and Cooper
2, 3]) surface in more restricted form in traditional categories of
textual meaning like “focus” or “development” or in specific textual
strategies that emphasize the writer’s contribution to the ideas and
information in a text:
“Although they may have a variety of forms and purposes, all essays
are essentially assertive. That is, they assert or put forward the writer’s
point of view on a particular subject. We call this point of view the
essay’s thesis, or main idea” (Axelrod and Cooper 400).
Likewise, discussions of writing as the discovery of personal meaning
(“Because stories, or narratives, are reconstructions of experience,
they enable you to reflect on your experiences and thus to make some
meaning of your life” [Harris and Cunningham 58]) are frequently linked
with views of writing as the communication of specific, author-centered
meaning: “In reading reconstructions of experience, be aware that writers
usually have a purpose beyond simply telling a good story. Although
they may not state a thesis explicitly, a controlling idea usually shapes
their story and the way they tell it. They are, in a sense, trying to
convince readers of something they believe is important” (Harris and
Cunningham 62).
Even views of writing as process and empowerment, including those influenced
by poststructuralism, frequently end up encouraging display of the writer’s
discovery of and control over specific ideas and perspectives. As Randall
Knoper puts it,
Hand in hand with processes that are thought to bring
writing to reader-based ideas are processes thought to bring writers
to control of their texts—to self-assertion, and ownership, and masterfully
autonomous shaping. The ‘empowerment of students” is an idea attractive
enough (to us all) to make even crusading poststructuralists drop their
notions that the writing “I” is always in process, always modifying
and modified, continuously dislocated. (134)
Admittedly, some composition scholarship consistently views meaning-making
in its general and most creative senses, and some pedagogies encourage
composing practices that lead to significant formulations of experience
while avoiding reductive practices for the most part (Kutz; Elbow and
Belanoff in many places). Yet quite often, many composition theorists,
researchers, and teachers are concerned primarily with those essays
that display the specific writer’s insights, conclusions, perspectives,
and knowledge in ways that focus on the writer’s own contributions,
highlighting the products of his or her efforts in much the same way
that texts of literary interpretation (and other kinds of academic analysis,
too) highlight the professional contribution of the writer. Admittedly,
some composition research implements a broad concept of “meaning-making,”
applying it to the construction and reception of informative and other
texts in which the interpretive or argumentative content provided by
the writer does not receive special attention. In addition, some pedagogies
treat notions of meaning-making and interpretation broadly, to cover
representative practices that create and convey significant formulations
of experience without attempting to reduce them to specific propositional
content (see Kutz).
For the most part, however, composition’s attention rests squarely
on the writer’s specific insights and meanings as well as on textual
strategies, genres, and composing practices that emphasize their presence.
With a few exceptions (Hairston and Ruszkiewicz, for example) discussions
of the composing process specify operations leading to the discovery,
embodiment, and communication of meaning, generally defined as fresh
or personal insight rather than as known information being communicated
for purposes other than embodiment of the writer’s personal perspective.
Composition scholarship draws from discourse analysis a concern with
the centrality of macro- and micropropositions and from functional sentence
perspective a focus on the clarity and emphasis with which assertions
are conveyed (see Vande Koppel). As Brannon and Knoblauch point out,
our ideal acts of teacher response focus on the writer’s personal intentions
and meanings and regard revision as a way of clarifying and conveying
them.
Texts, discursive practices, and composing acts tend to be devalued
or redefined when their meanings are derived primarily from the culture
or situation, or when their effects depend not so much on propositional
content as on informational content and social relationships. For example,
many written texts in professional or business settings are formulaic
(letters, recordings of data, proposals) or present information gathered
from secondary sources without significant new data or reformulations
on the part of the writer. Other texts (including letters and reports)
serve not so much to convey specific meanings (except at a secondary
level) but to create and sustain relationships, to provide records of
data or agreements, or to transmit detailed information (such as product
specifications). Although such highly contextualized and “unoriginal”
texts are essential in a highly technical society and may require considerable
writing skill, imagination, and awareness of audience, composition
instructors often criticize them as dull and formulaic, asking for originality
and voice and encouraging students to employ writing and revising processes
more appropriate for expressive or analytical texts (see Hairston and
Ruszkiewicz).
Frances Harrington has shown that memoranda that display little propositional
coherence frequently succeed because they grow out of, maintain, or
realign social relationship. I have demonstrated elsewhere that magazine
feature articles generally lack high-level propositional structures
and are instead organized as informational clusters around topics such
as background, features, good/bad, procedures, and applications. Even
news articles drawn explicitly from a reporter’s observations usually
avoid devices such as thesis statements that call attention to the writer’s
contributions; such devices are most often reserved for the editorial
page and for columns. It may likewise be tempting to transform the genre
of the informative research report into that of documented essays that
record a personal search for knowledge (see Fulwiler 182-98, 243-49).
While such a transformation can be portrayed as a move to writing that
is more real and engaging, there is little evidence that this form of
expression is inherently better. Instead, the movement likely indicates
a preference among composition instructors for writing that serves to
display an individual’s insights and perspective.
The contradictions between broad principles and reductive practices
that elevate some meaning-making activities over others are marks of
an overdetermined system similar to that of literary studies. More importantly,
the production of texts highlighting the writer’s contribution is a
vital activity for the professional middle class, a social group that
includes scholars, teachers, and other professionals. This is a social
formation whose continued stability and success depends on its expertise
and originality. Academics, engineers, doctors, and lawyers are paid
for their opinions; their originality (real or not) earns wages and
status (Ehrenreich, “Fear”; Ross). The overdetermined system that currently
shapes our discipline works ideologically to encourage the production
of texts that reproduce professional values and goals and to mask the
importance of discourse practices that further the interests of other
social formations (see Gere). Because of our identities as teachers
and scholars, it may often be difficult for us to recognize the importance
of discourse practices that center on anything else but meaning in a
restricted, propositional sense—difficult, but worth trying if we are
to uphold the lofty goals we profess for reading and writing.
University of Rhode Island
Kingston, Rhode Island
The Personal Essay as Unmarked Genre
Beverly Wall
In an amusing piece in The New York Times Magazine,
Deborah Tannen uses the linguistic concept of “markedness” to contrast
gender differences in choices of dress. In linguistics, Tannen explains,
the “unmarked form of a word carries the meaning that goes without saying—what
you think of when you’re not thinking anything special” (18). Not surprisingly,
the unmarked case is masculine not only in language but in everyday
social options set by gender. Men can choose to be “unmarked” in their
dress if they wish, Tannen argues, but women are always “marked,” or
interpreted, whether they choose to wear suits or jeans, heels or sneakers.
For the majority of college composition classrooms, the personal essay
functions in much the same way as Tannen’s description of generic pronouns
and men’s brown or blue slacks. The personal essay is our unmarked genre
in late twentieth-century America, the kind of writing that goes without
saying—no matter how heated the professional debate—when textbooks are
designed and syllabi constructed for first-year writing courses. If
we were to consult Walter Beale’s A Pragmatic Theory of Rhetoric,
we would find a rich range and depth of rhetorical genres available
to us. Yet, with hundreds of contemporary, mainstream defacto
genres of writing to choose from and over two thousand years of rhetorical
education in the West, why has this particular genre, the personal essay,
become our implied premise, our unstated assumption, in composition
instruction?
The personal essay has, to be sure, been a topic of considerable discussion
and questioning in recent years by scholars and theorists interested
in philosophical issues related to subjectivity, authorial position,
the construction of self and community, and the nature of expressive
discourse. As is all too often the case, however, such debates have
had little effect on actual classroom practices for the vast number
of sections of composition taught each year. Even when composition instructors
talk about teaching the civic value of public argument, or the academic
empowerment of writing across the curriculum, or the playful, creative
ironies of postmodern discourse, the personal essay is almost always
there, sitting imperceptibly in the corner (“just a warm-up exercise”)
or perhaps hiding behind the curtain (“an alternative for when the abortion
debate fails”).
Instructors’ reasons for assigning the personal essay have usually
fallen into one of two categories: (1) an argument from necessity, which
assumes that students can’t write anything else, at least not at the
beginning of a course, because they are too young or unsophisticated
to know things beyond their own personal experiences; or (2) a strongly
held belief that the personal essay is the touchstone genre of “good
writing” (in the composition classroom, that is) with its belletristic
promises of an authentic voice, rich detailing of individual experience,
and epiphanic moments. The first line of reasoning is particularly weak,
offering a rationale that is profoundly arhetorical in its conception
of writers and writing and in its Ramist dichotomy of reset verba.
The second line of reasoning makes a stronger case, but it is also disappointing.
It is more understandable, given the dynamics of English Studies and
the institutional placement of composition instruction. Most composition
courses are taught, of course, by adjuncts with degrees in literature
or graduate students who are apprentices in English departments.
Two important considerations derive from this primary allegiance to
the culture of English Studies. First, like other humanistic disciplines,
English Studies has always begged the question of why its texts should
be taught, a version of what Richard Lanham calls the “Q” question.
Lanham cites Anthony Grafton and Lisa Jardine, who argue that humanistic
disciplines have promoted an ideal of humanism as “training for life,”
but have actually practiced “the humanities—a curriculum training a
social elite to fulfill its predetermined social role” (xvi). Lester
Faigley, in his discussion of autobiographical essays and the ways
in which we evaluate “good writing,” claims that “writing teachers have
been as much or more interested in who they want their students to be
as in what they want their students to write” (“Judging Writing” 396).
If this is true, the personal essay becomes the perfect vehicle for
identifying and nurturing those who will be allowed to join the club
and separating out those who won’t.
Second, the discipline of English Studies has tended to beg the question
of how literary texts should be taught. (I don’t mean here how they
should be interpreted.) Lanham sees this as a sub-issue of his “Q” question.
Lanham draws on Gerald Graff, who argues that the traditional pedagogy
for a training in English Studies is based on the assumption that “literature
teaches itself” (9). In the Great Books version of this pedagogy, for
example, students need simply to be exposed to “great” literary texts,
and the rest will happen naturally. The postmodern version is different,
but not as different as some would like to think. To the composition
instructor who feels exiled from this literary Garden of Eden, and who
may feel that simply “exposing” students to good writing will go a long
way towards teaching them how to write, the personal essay is an obvious
choice as a model for reading and writing, especially with its strong
literary qualities and the preferences of its best practitioners for
narrative structures and private insights.
If all of these assumptions and attitudes are transported into the
composition classroom, the lowest place in both the departmental and
institutional hierarchy, then we can understand the unmarked status
of the personal essay. It is the genre that goes without saying in composition
instruction. Even to argue over the inclusion of personal essays seems
natural, comfortable territory for most composition instructors. But
to propose that a composition course use legal briefs or judicial opinions,
for example, is to “mark” it as a specialized endeavor, as something
to be interpreted, like wearing heels or sneakers. But then again, why
should we be surprised, since we long ago relinquished our rhetorical
tradition and the teaching of composition to the arhetorical guardianship
of English Studies?
Trinity College
Hartford, Connecticut
Historical Perspectives, or Things that Might Also Be Said (Counterpoint)
Linda Peterson
For those of us responding to these position papers,
some of the analyses hit close to home; others seem mere matters of
intellectual contemplation. For example, I read (and still read) with
a smile and with a nod of the head, John Trimbur’s analysis (see below)
of re- and de-oedipalizing the classroom and Nedra Reynolds’ history
of the process paradigm; perhaps blindly, I did not (and still don’t)
see myself engaged in oedipal struggles within the classroom or find
myself caught in that necessary, if bygone era of scientific research
on composing. I did wince, however, when I read Beverly Wall’s “The
Personal Essay as Unmarked Genre,” particularly in the context of Robert
A. Schwegler’s comments on our socialization within literature departments
and Judith Goleman’s statements (see below) about composition studies
as complicitous with the desires and insecurities of the middle class.
What made me wince especially were their uses of history, and to these
uses I want to respond.
Wall points out, quite rightly, that the personal essay has become
the assumed, “unmarked” genre of the composition classroom and that
we often teach it for weak reasons—for example, because we believe students
can’t write anything else or because it represents a cherished, belletristic
“touchstone” of “good writing.” Contextualizing our practice historically
and socially, as Schwegler and Goleman do, we might add that we teach
it because we’re the sons and daughters of literary critics and because
we share the values of the middle-class of which we are a part. Wall
would add that our over-reliance on the personal essay ignores “two
thousand years of rhetorical education in the West.” Such insights would
seem to suggest that we should abandon the personal essay as a genre,
now too “tainted” by a dubious past and politically incorrect class
associations, and turn instead to other rhetorical forms.
I cannot engage here in a full-scale defense of the personal essay,
which I think should be one of several genres taught in composition
courses. (What genre, I wonder, will Roxanne Mountford teach when she
teaches “culture, not community”? [see below]) But I do want to remove
a bit of the taint by correcting mistaken assumptions about the personal
essay and its generic history (not all necessarily Wall’s mistaken assumptions).
The current rap against the personal essay tends to suggest that it’s
a white, middle-class, masculine, or (worst of all) literary genre.
It’s easy to trot out the usual suspects: Montaigne and Bacon, Lamb
and Hazlitt, Arnold and Newman. For avid readers of the genre, however,
it is just as easy to provide counter evidence: the essays of Victorian
women who used the personal essay to gain access to formal education
and the professions (see Morgan); the collective writings of Working
Women’s Co-Operative Guild, who composed personal accounts to win maternity
rights; or, more recently, the personal essays of American women of
color like Jewelle Gomez, June Jordan, Maxine Hong Kingston, or Judith
OrtizCofer who recall personal memories to raise public issues. My point
is that no genre is, by and of itself, singly-gendered or politically-marked
or socially-exclusive. It all depends on how it is used—by whom? for
what? and why?—in a historical context. My point is also that the personal
essay is not a univocal, univalent form. Viewed historically, the personal
essay has appeared in many places for many purposes.
A more general point might be made about the history in these position
papers: the histories reported or constructed are strangely negative
ones. It is good to see historical evidence being brought to bear on
current issues in composition studies; for me, one of the exciting trends
within the profession has been the return to historical research on
rhetoric, composition, and pedagogy. But it is disconcerting to discover
history used primarily, almost exclusively, in a critical mode—for example,
to show composition studies as a class-driven narrative (Goleman, below),
or our interest in “clarifying and conveying intention and meaning”
as deriving mostly from our origins in literary study (Schwegler), or
our interest in “the behavioral model of process” as reflecting an outmoded
individualism (Shamoon). Like my counter-examples for the personal essay,
other versions of history might be constructed—for example, to show
composition studies as responsive to newly-enfranchised classes or ethnic
groups, or to show our interest in clarifying intention and conveying
meaning as deriving from habits of biblical reading in the Judaic and
Christian traditions, or to suggest, following Jerome Bruner, that an
individual self cannot be dispensed with when we are discussing written
“acts of meaning.” Perhaps progressive intentions tend to minimize the
historical past, but a little more balance—a both/and rather than an
either/or—might get nearer the truth. Perhaps we should also remember
that histories of the profession cited here are constructions, not raw
facts; like personal essays, they represent one view of the past—and
the present. When we say “things that go without saying,” we unavoidably
say only some of the things, leaving just as many other, equally true
things, unsaid.
Yale University
New Haven, Connecticut
The Great American Freshman English Course: Initiation and Indoctrination
in the Composition Curriculum (Counterpoint)
Lynn Z. Bloom
What do we want students to know and be able to do
at what stage of their academic careers? In what ways do we want them
to learn and how do we want that learning to be reinforced? Any curriculum,
any time, any place, has varied and competing, sometimes conflicting
agendas. Any institution’s composition curriculum incorporates its own
multiple agendas, overt and covert. The composition curriculum also,
perforce, accommodates the agendas of the constituents who pay its bills—tuition-paying
parents, religious and corporate sponsors, taxpayers, state legislatures,
the federal government. Moreover, the composition agenda is freighted
with whatever political, social, and cultural concerns are paramount
at any given time. Specialized agendas of the field of composition itself
are likely to come second-to-last on this list. Dead last are the goals
of the students, who conventionally have very little to say about either
the theoretical or practical components of this introductory hurdle
to what they really came to college to study. Everybody but the students
gets to determine the curriculum that is, of course, all for the students’
own good.
My sense of the field, reinforced by the colloquy in these pages, is
that there remains a chasm between the voices in the professional discourse
of conferences and journals, and what actually goes on in freshman composition.
The normative agenda of the introductory writing course is tangential
to whatever contemporary theory and research may tell us about anything—whatever
the perspective, for example feminist, Marxist, social constructionist;
whatever the ideals and aims of a Freirean (or other) liberatory pedagogy;
however explicit the NCTE statement of the “Students’ Right to Their
Own Language” (still on the books a quarter century after its proclamation).
For to justify the inclusion—and funding—of freshman composition as
often the only course required of all students throughout the university,
the course’s fundamental purpose remains by and large what it has
been for the past century: to socialize, initiate, and indoctrinate
its students into the white middle-class, even “elite” community
of language and values in which they are expected to function throughout
the rest of their college courses and after they graduate.
Thus, as Mike Rose points Out, the critical literacy that we
expect of our students, the ability to frame an argument or take “someone
else’s argument apart, systematically inspecting a document, an issue,
or an event, synthesizing different points of view, applying a theory
to disparate phenomena” has traditionally “only been developed in an
elite” (188). Harkin makes a similar point in analyzing critiques of
Shaughnessy’s Errors and Expectations :“No discipline can deal
theoretically”—and she might also have said pragmatically—”with the
paradox that ‘improving’ basic writers’ syntax (or other features of
their writing) may violate their right to their own language” (132).
Among the things that go without saying is the elitist underpinning
of The Great American Freshman Composition Course: standard English
is its lingua franca , critical literacy is its overriding aim.
As Harkin says, “There can be no generalized theory of writing capable
of serving as foundation for an ideologically neutralway of teaching
that improves both students’ practice and their political position.”
These goals, and their attendant problems and conflicts, “arise from
different belief systems” (133). The belief that a metatheory, or metapractice,
can reconcile or even amalgamate the disparate burdens and baggage
that colleges (read society at large) freight freshman composition courses
with is what Stanley Fish calls “theory hope” (“Antifoundationalism”).
Astute writing directors don’t need to be weathermen to know that they’re
caught in crosswinds blowing with gale force. Their jobs—and thus whatever
influence they wield—may depend on their success in accommodating the
actual elitist curricular goals of freshman composition, all the while
reaffirming their faith in the theoretical agendas of a democratic society,
a politically sensitive university, and a theoretically sophisticated
profession. And believing in them all.
University of Connecticut
Storrs, Connecticut
Classrooms as Communities: At What Cost?
Roxanne Mountford
To what end do we teach writing? This question, which
has not gone without saying in the teaching of writing, was perhaps
best debated at the 1989 Conference on College Composition and Communication
by Peter Elbow (“Problematics of Discourse”) and David Bartholomae (“Response”).
Elbow advocated the writing classroom as a place to develop students’
life-long writing skills, while Bartholomae advocated the writing classroom
as a place to develop students’ writing and thinking skills as defined
by the university. Recently, the debate has shifted to the question
of ideology. On the one hand, Maxine Hairston argues that we should
not be about the business of challenging the ideologies of our students
(“Diversity”). It is not our job. On the other hand, Lillian Bridwell-Bowles,
Linda Brodkey, Susan Jarratt, Mary Louise Pratt and others suggest that
one of the roles of the writing instructor is to bring issues of difference
into the classroom, especially as they affect students’ ways of reading
and standards for writing. Bartholomae appears to be moving in this
direction as well, suggesting that we rethink the ideologies implicit
in the university by allowing our students’ home cultures to challenge
our perspectives of “good writing” (“The Tidy House”).
However, throughout these important debates, the concept of the classroom
as a kind of “community” has gone without saying. Elbow offered the
teacherless classroom, in which students wrote for each other and responded
to each other’s writing (Writing Without Teachers). Bartholomae
and Petrosky popularized a thematic approach to writing that creates
a community of writers thinking and writing about a particular problem.
In the social constructionist turn of the 1980’s, Lunsford, Bruffee,
and others championed collaborative writing and learning in the composition
classroom. In offering their critical pedagogies, Jarratt and Pratt
suggest a classroom that becomes a “contact zone” for student differences,
differences students draw from the media and from their own experiences.
Puzzling through the problem that communities by definition include
some while excluding others, Greg Clark suggests that communities, broadly
defined, can learn to converse together productively without the patterns
of dominance and exclusion that have marked the failure of democratic
processes in this country. He suggests that we should encourage our
writing students to see themselves as a “community of differing equals”
by practicing their listening skills—as Clark puts it, by “deferring
conviction in Ltheir] own assertions until [they] have considered the
assertions of others made in response” (72). For Clark, the composition
classroom should be a place where students learn “the practice of democratic
citizenship” (72)—that is, a sense of membership and responsibility
to a group.
In all these pedagogies, the idea of the classroom as a community—a
democratic oasis in which confrontation leads to growth and collaboration
leads to greater justice for all—is a liberal narrative that we need
to reconsider. In the classroom, students see themselves not as “joining”
a cause or group or community but rather as joining a coincidental grouping
of individuals who are developing skills for future employment or self-interest.
Even in the best of circumstances, students are resistant to the idea
of investing in fellow classmates, since the investment one makes in
a community generally is long-lived, and classes, by definition, are
brief. In addition, students are understandably anxious about showing
their differences—revealing one’s identity politics in the classroom
still means risking lowered grades or even physical harm. At Rensselaer
Polytechnic Institute, one worn an student who spoke out in a class
about being sexually harassed by fellow students found her tires slashed
at the end of the day, a note on the window warning her against becoming
one of the “damned feminists.” In the feminism and composition workshop
at the 1994 Conference on College Composition and Communication, Sarah
Sloane talked about a gay student she interviewed who carefully masked
his identity in his composition classes, going so far as to write about
being involved in heterosexual relationships to ensure he was not discovered.
When his advanced composition class voted to study and write about AIDS,
he stopped going to class and ultimately failed the course. In this
class, the instructor’s goal was to build a community by allowing students
to agree on a topic of study. Sloane suggests we cannot be sure our
students are safe to engage in an “authentic” discussion of their own
differences, a discussion that is necessary, according to Clark, to
create a classroom community. And their fears may be well-founded.
It is time to dissociate the goal of introducing students to cultural
difference in the composition classroom and the goal of creating a classroom
community (or, as Clark puts it, “democratic citizenship”). Students’
own differences are overdetermined and often politically explosive.
With the issue of teacher authority and evaluation hovering as a backdrop
in the classroom, class discussions tend to move toward the teacher’s
interests rather than the class’s; we all learn in school to perform
our differences in such a way that we find teacher approval. The classroom
is not an oasis. It is not neutral territory. To accept this characterization
of the classroom, however, is not to agree with Maxine Hairston that
teaching cultural difference is not our job. It is, rather, an invitation
to find a way for students to reframe “difference” without risking too
much self-revelation.
One place to find that framework is in anthropology and cultural studies,
where the central concept is “culture.” A class that reads, writes,
and thinks about culture is not necessarily becoming a community itself,
but learns how to learn about other communities, including the communities
represented by individual students. Teaching students to become experts
in language and culture can provide them with a way to understand not
only the immutable differences brought about by cultural immersion,
political identity, and disciplinary boundaries, but also ways to bridge
those differences. In addition, by focusing on instances of difference
that occur beyond the classroom, students can engage in analysis of
language and culture without necessarily revealing their own tribal
affiliations. Finally, in a school like Rensselaer Polytechnic Institute,
in which introductory writing courses are populated by students who
are 80 percent white and 90 percent male, teaching the broader concept
of cultural difference avoids the tokenism that necessarily occurs when
students’ own backgrounds become the source of the differences on which
the class discussions turn.
In such a classroom, the readings could focus on the way in which
communication patterns develop within distinct cultures. Part of the
nature of communication, whether within an electrical engineering program
or within a gay, lesbian, and bisexual Student Alliance is to include
some members and to exclude others. The language shared within these
groups is a pleasurable code, the knowledge of which marks its members.
However, language practices are often the source of conflict and misunderstanding
among groups. Students could be asked to analyze such conflicts that
turn on differences in language use, power, and cultural orientation.
In their papers students could analyze the communication patterns of
groups they have been a part of the professional writing in their chosen
fields. In addition, they could conduct ethnographic-type research about
the language used by groups, either groups on campus or groups in their
local town. Some of the reading for the class could focus on the problems
and issues associated with communication among groups. For instance,
one might attempt to show them how patterns in writing differ cross-culturally
(for example, according to Kant di Lima, Americans prefer “points,”
Brazilians prefer “subtlety”). All these exercises are designed to give
students a framework for analyzing communication as a product of culture.
Through such a course, students learn a kind of expertise, which could
be defined simply as an ethnographer’s perspective on communication.
Through such a course, they learn that cultural difference is inevitable
but that stereotypes are usually wrong. They learn that ritual acts
of orality and literacy, including the academic and professional prose
they are expected to write throughout their lives, are deeply ingrained
with cultural values, politics, and power. Teaching culture, not community,
is, I think, a way to be responsible to the deep differences represented
by the gender, race, ethnicity, class, and sexual orientation of our
students without placing individual students at risk. There is nothing
original about this syllabus: feminists in several disciplines have
discovered that students cannot be expected to critically evaluate the
cultural ground on which they stand without pedagogical intervention
(see especially Eichhorn et at.). Adopting a critical pedagogy does
not require us to turn our students’ own lives into the subject of the
class. What goes without saying in the rhetoric of democratization represented
by Clark and others is that our students come to our classrooms sifted
according to relative cultural worth. Thrown together under the presumption
of equality, our students will sift themselves accordingly, with affluent
white European-American males glistening on top like fool’s gold.
Rennsselar Polytechnic Institute
Troy, New York
In Loco Parentis: Teachers’ Authority in the Writing Classroom
John Trimbur
In a lecture titled “The Idea of an Educated Public,”
Alasdair Maclntyre refers to teachers as the “forlorn hope of Western
modernity.” What makes the hope invested in teachers so forlorn, Maclntyre
explains, is that teachers are charged with a mission that is both “essential”
and “impossible.” Teachers are presented with the apparently contradictory
task of teaching young people how to fit into a social role or vocation
and at the same time how to think for themselves. Teachers, in Maclntyre’s
view, are pulled between the competing goals of socialization and individuation,
domestication and emancipation.
According to Maclntyre, these competing demands can be reconciled only
through the creation of an educated public, where critical discussion
of shared terms and social purposes are understood to be features of
the roles to which students are socialized. Maclntyre believes such
a public sphere did in fact exist at one time, though on a limited basis,
during the Scottish Enlightenment, when ministers, lawyers, schoolmasters,
merchants, and others understood their social roles, enacted in forums
such as town councils, presbyteries, bank board of directors, law courts,
and so on, to look beyond immediate interests to the common good.
The notion of a public sphere, of course, is a problematical one. Inflected
with nostalgia for an idealized historic moment when the formation of
the middle classes appears to be inseparable from a sense of civic responsibility
and moral authority, the public sphere of the late eighteenth and nineteenth
centuries may be no more, as Terry Eagleton argues, than a necessary
fiction to imagine how private and public interests can correspond to
each other. Moreover, even such a utopian vision carries with it exclusions—of
women, children, workers, ethnic and racial minorities, “illegal aliens,”
and so on. It may be better, as Nancy Fraser suggests, to think in terms
of “subaltern counterpublics.” But a politics of difference, identity,
and location make it difficult to conceive of how a civic discourse
might take place across pluralized spheres of life, even when their
boundaries are blurred and mobile.
In other words, one might say that the “dilemma” Maclntyre identifies
in Western modernity has been constituted as a condition of postmodern
existence. If anything, the terms Maclntyre wants to hold in tension
have become increasingly polarized so that to speak for one is to speak
against the other. This is certainly the case in writing instruction,
where oppositions such as “academic discourse~~ vs. “personal voice,
social construction” vs. “expressivism,” and “vocationalism” vs. “liberal
arts” have become predictable and formulaic.
One of the difficulties in thinking clearly about the “essential” but
“impossible” task of forming public spheres where individuation and
socialization might be complementary rather than polarized objectives
is the fact that teachers confront students in loco parentis,
in the domestic space of classrooms, in the role of surrogate parents.
Teaching is based on relations of age-dependency that charge classrooms
in powerful ways. Pedagogy, that is, teaches not only meanings but also
acceptable structures of feeling and orientations toward authority.
It organizes students’ affective lives and reproduces complex and contradictory
ideologies of the emotions. Furthermore, what complicates this pedagogy
of the emotions at the present moment is that oedipalization—the internalization
and identification with authority figures characteristic of earlier
stages of capitalist schooling and family life—has been disrupted and
no longer operates simply as the “goes without saying” that determines
gender roles and identities within patriarchal social formations. Instead,
I want to suggest here, the pedagogy of the emotions veers back and
forth between de-oedipalization and reoedipalization, revealing in
the process deep-seated ambivalences about the authority ascribed to
and enacted by teachers.
For convenience, I will give these two alternating moments familiar
names—Peter Elbow and Kenneth A. Bruffee. (I am conscious that such
nominalization reveals the oedipal drama in my own formation as a teacher
through relations with esteemed mentors.) Elbow seeks to distance the
teacher-figure, at least temporarily, from the position of the stern
father, thereby invoking a fantasy of de-oedipalizing the classroom
so that subjects can emerge without guilt and shame. This, it seems
to me, is at least one of the meanings of “writing without teachers,”
writing without the debilitating influences of internalized authority
figures. On the other hand, facing the same crisis of authority that
leads Elbow toward de-oedipalization, Bruffee seeks to re-oedipalize
the classroom by organizing students into social groups that will give
them the collective strength to confront the authority of the teacher.
His is a fantasy not of evading authority but of encountering it directly,
through re-oedipalized fraternity,where the association of peers can
behead the king and kill the father within.
Now, the point Iwish to make is that both versions of the oedipal drama
are distinctly middle-class ones that reveal contradictions in styles
of parenting in the postwar family. From this perspective, it seems
to me, Elbow and Bruffee recapitulate—and are locked in a compulsive
repetition of—the alternation between the desire of the 1950s and 1960s
to domesticate Dad the authority-figure as pal, advisor, and companion
and the reaction against such suburban permissiveness and the “waning
of affect” that followed in 1970s and 1980s youth culture, when there
was nothing left to rebel against. Elbow’s strategy is one of seduction
and the promise of intimacy—a feminization of the patriarchal teacher
and his transformation into the “new male,” where a community of readers
and writers substitutes for the family. In this sense, Elbow represents
a version of the “abdication of authority” and “cult of authenticity”
Christopher Lasch writes about in The Culture of Narcissism revealing
traces at the level of postsecondary writing instruction of the child-centeredness
and the emotional investments in youth characteristic of the post-World
War II middle class family. Bruffee’s strategy, on the other hand, attempts
to fill the void left by the death of the stern and distant father,
not to restore him but to pose his authority in institutional rather
than personal and familial terms as a socially constructed artifact.
Bruffee’s point, not always fully grasped in social constructionist
circles, is that collaborative learning involves not just organizing
students to emulate the social processes of intellectual work in order
to induct them into an academic discourse community. It also involves
precipitating a crisis of authority—a reoedipalizing the classroom—so
that they can encounter and experience institutional socialization in
a more transparent, self conscious way. Here a community of “knowledgeable
peers” and the authority of knowledge and its institutions substitutes
for the family as sites of affective investment.
This oscillation between individuation and socialization, deoedipalization
and re-oedipalization, that I have attributed, eponymically, to Elbow
and Bruffee continues to play in middle class life, linked inescapably
to contradictions in the domestic and social reproduction of the professional
managerial classes. It is marked, among other places, by employer surveys
that routinely indicate the desire for graduates who show initiative,
think critically, and work independently and who follow directions,
cooperate with organizational goals, and work well with others. Now,
on the one hand, such surveys recast the “dilemma” of modernity, as
Maclntyre poses it, only at the more banal level of the bottom line
in business and industry. On the other hand, one could pry these desires
apart and say that employers have conflated two kinds of recruiting
goals—for high-power creative leadership types (typically educated at
elite liberal arts colleges and universities) and compliant mid-level
management types (more likely educated at state universities and colleges).
To say as much, however, would miss in at least one important respect
how Maclntyre’s “dilemma” is rooted in the contradictions of contemporary
class society. The polarization of individuation and socialization is
not simply a descriptive marker of social, economic, and cultural differences
in the formation of the middle classes, whether in families or in schools.
This polarization rather emerges from the contradictory, relatively
autonomous, and overdetermined practices enacted in child-raising, schooling,
and the division of labor. The oscillation back and forth in styles
of parenting, teaching, and corporate recruiting reveal the persistently
unstable reproduction of capitalist social relations and the variable
acquisition by the middle classes of credentials and cultural capital.
To imagine, as Maclntyre does, an educated public—a public sphere of
civic discourse and personal participation that can reconcile individuation
and socialization—we will need to address what Marx saw as the “mystery”
of the commodity form of production, namely the contradiction between
the use value and the exchange value of production. This is the contradiction
the middle classes experience in everyday life, the conflict between
a desire to perform socially useful intellectual and professional work
and the imperative to build a career, credentials, personal and financial
standing. And this is the contradiction, I argue, that is persistently
figured in a displaced and refracted way in the polarities of writing
instruction.
Worcester Polytechnic Institute
Worcester, Massachusetts
Composition and Social Class: The Things That Go Without Saying
Judith Goleman
The unstated effects of social class relations on the
organization and mission of composition constitute such a large and
important area for research and action that at least one leading scholar
has suggested that the entire field be reconstituted as a “site for
dismantling [these] particularly troublesome versions of... hegemonic...
‘common sense”’ (Miller, “The Feminization” 52). In this brief statement,
I will discuss two versions of hegemonic common sense that I consider
to be particularly troublesome to composition. And while these versions
of common-sense have not exactly “gone without saying,” their critique
has not yet been assimilated into our thinking in ways that have led
to consistent, large-scale action.
(1) Institutional and Curricular Common-Sense
Institutional common sense seems to dictate that because composition
is so large—approximately 70 percent of all English classes taught—that
it must also be cheap (see Slevin 5). Staffed largely by part-time
women and graduate students, composition depends on an underpaid faculty
to perpetuate it, a faculty who receive neither benefits nor job security.
Along with exploitative hiring practices, the history of tenure and
promotion difficulties among those who do hold full-time positions in
composition attests to the subordinate position of composition in the
academic hierarchy.
These hiring practices and promotion procedures are related to common-sense
assumptions about the fundamental differences between literature and
composition. Where literature is perceived as providing the booklist
for humanism and the reading methods for becoming humanized, composition
is perceived as struggling with the specific texts of students not yet
ready for universal discourse. “Stained by their immersion in history,”
writes James F. Slevin, compositionists are relegated to marginal status
(6). So fundamental to the economic structure of English is this dichotomy
between literature and composition that Slevin notes, “If we didn’t
have it, we’d have to invent it” (6).
(2) Pedagogical Common Sense: Good Writing
Recent research has suggested that while English studies benefited
greatly from the rise of the American university, rhetoric did not.
For one thing, rhetoric had no place within the German model upon which
the graduate degree system of the American university was based (see
Connors, “Rhetoric” 61). Lacking an empirical basis for research, rhetoric
steadily lost its place in English departments once departments began
granting the Ph.D. (Connors, “Rhetoric” 63). At the same time, however,
that rhetoric faculty declined in numbers and status, the demand for
their services as writing instructors rose. In short, the increasingly
important humanistic mission of English studies within a less exclusive
American university system created the conditions for the recycling
of rhetoric as freshman composition. First at Harvard and then elsewhere,
freshman composition was developed to filter a new social class of students
in order, writes Susan Miller, to “assure the worthiness, moral probity,
and fitness of those who might otherwise slip through the newly woven
net that would now take in additional, but only tentatively entitled,
students” (“The Feminization” 44). In due course, the all-too-familiar
situation developed whereby the most tentative faculty taught the most
tentative students those social, moral, and grammatical skills of “good
writing” that they needed for entry into the real university.
Even this brief review of composition in terms of institutional and
curricular relations should suggest the extent to which the things that
go without saying about the teaching of good writing derive from a complex
of hegemonic relations within the academy and between the academy and
society-at-large. In “Literacy and the Discourse of Crisis,” John Trimbur
deepens this understanding. He traces the ways we have come to define
schooled literacy by following the displacement of middle-class anxieties
about its slipping status onto issues of language and schooling (280).
What Trimbur finds when he looks at a number of American literacy crises
is that the middle class has been looking to education to guarantee
its status and prerogatives at those times when larger economic and
global forces threatened them. One particularly important consequence
has been the persistent narrowing of the notion of literacy to schooled
literacy. A condensed and thoroughly institutionalized meaning has taken
hold, giving public schooling great power as the moral and intellectual
arbiter of individual success and failure (Trimbur, “Literacy” 280).
Looking to education to secure its future, the middle class has also
used the educational apparatus to justify the social and economic inequality
of individuals from subordinate groups.
In short, the history of composition is inseparable from the desires
and insecurities of the middle class and its displacement of these thwarted
desires and mounting insecurities onto the teaching of literacy. As
a tool for guaranteeing upward mobility, literacy has become the imaginary
marker of an individual’s social viability even as its decontextualized
schooled version has made it increasingly unrelated to social life.
Assumptions about the universal nature of “good writing” have resulted
in methods which emphasize writing for personal correctness at the
expense ofwriting for popular use, and to the equation of such correctness
with moral virtue and social viability. As these disciplinary standards
and pacifying methods have tended to disentitle students from writing
in public and transactional ways, there is reason to question their
function as a driving force of composition. There is simply no getting
around the fact that the academy’s privileging of “good writing” has
been at the expense of allowing students to develop a sense of authorship
and a capacity to participate in public discourse (Miller, Textual
Carnivals 55). (Similarly, the faculties who teach writing are themselves
un-authorized as “staff’ and disallowed participation in academic decision-making.)
In light of these institutional, curricular, and pedagogical contradictiOnS,
I suggest that we need to shift our attention from how to teach students
to write to what students write.
Educated to revere the importance of surface correctness and to accept
huge amounts of decontextualized work toward their credentialing, both
current and future generations of composition students need to be invited,
slowly, into a newcounter~hegemOnicwriting project. The purposes, broadly
speaking, are dual: to analyze the social functions of their current
reading and writing practices; to reconstruct these practices for different
social functions and subject positions, as they can and as they choose.
By using writing to discern the lineaments of their “situations,” composition
students would not be subjected to lessons in “how to write”; instead,
they would be working the writing that has been working them: studying
in various contexts what this writing does, how it does it, and what
the available or yet-to-be imagined alternatives might be.
In brief, the discourse of composition—what we teach students to write—is
a painfully important effect of our history, all too subject to common-sense
thinking. Students who learn composition from us, I am suggesting, should
learn that we cannot offer them technical procedures or interesting
processes alone; rather, students should learn that these processes
can be mastered only in conjunction with the world views, subject positions,
and regimes of truth of which they are a part.
University of Massachusetts
Boston, Massachusetts
The Morning and the Afternoon (Counterpoint)
Robert L. Connors
Although I know that this is supposed to be a collection
of position papers, it is impossible for me to relate to it as such,
because I experienced it as a day, a specific day, a hot and somewhat
sticky day spent at the University of Rhode Island’s beautiful W. Alton
Jones Campus in June of 1994. We were there to discuss The Things that
Go Without Saying in Composition Studies. During that day, seven papers
on this topic were presented and discussed in the morning inside one
of the sybaritic conference lodges at Alton Jones. After lunch, groups
were formed to discuss the conference themes while on a long walk through
the nature preserve and then to return and report on their discussions.
I was struck by the bifurcated nature of the day’s works and talk,
which seemed to evidence some kind of multiple-personality disorder
among the assembled composition folks. The morning and afternoon seemed
conducted from divergent worlds of experience and diverse tacit assumptions,
and very different things seemed to “go without saying” before lunch
and after lunch. I tried to define these late in the afternoon, jotting
down notes on how the day divided up. Here are my notes.
Morning. After muffins and coffee in the cool of the air-conditioning,
we listen to and talk with many noted and brilliant composition specialists.
Among all of us, on the basis of our discussion, it goes without saying
that:
1.Our most central task as literacy educators is understanding and
acting on issues of the cultural and ideological contexts of writing.
2. The “process” (expressivist/cognitivist) paradigm of teaching
and research is naive and outmoded, and we have to move beyond it.
3. Individualism and concepts of personal agency are delusions, and
we must avoid being trapped by them as we consider issues of literacy
education.
4. All meaning is constructed socially, and our choice as educators
involved working to further that construction with or striving
to further that construction against the grain of the larger
culture’s ideologies.
5. The goals of literacy pedagogies should thus be to assist adaptation
to existing academic realities through teaching conventions or to
work for social change through analyses of economic and cultural forces.
6. For either of these purposes, the personal essay is a questionable
form and is proof of the low status of composition.
7. Being middle class is a somewhat ignoble status and an unsophisticated
goal to wish for our students.
8. Most composition teaching is naive if not destructive.
Afternoon. After lunch we walk through the park-like preserve in self-selected
clumps. Another male and I attach ourselves to the “all-women” group
and promenade with them, talking. These people are mostly teachers.
The air is still and hot, and we walk slowly. We find goose quills by
the pond. After we return and hear reports from other walking groups,
it seems to go without saying that:
1. Our most central task as literacy educators is teaching students
to write more effectively for themselves and for their other classes.
2. Students are genuine individuals who have real needs, desires,
and agency. So are we.
3. The process paradigm of teaching is a kind of default setting
for us, what we all naturally assume and use, the methodological sine
qua non underlying all other pedagogies we try out.
4. Meaning inheres in feelings and emotions, which may be constructed
socially but which are felt, acted on, and written about individually.
5. The personal essay is a central genre from which many others can
grow.
6. Being middle class is a reasonable thing to want or to propose
for our students, and most of us are and always will be inescapably
middle class.
7. Most composition teaching does help students, if the teacher truly
cares about helping students.
How are we to meld these multiple personalities? Perhaps we do not
need to worry about it too much. They are our heads and our hearts,
and they do not work well apart from each other. As long as the morning
is there to prod the afternoon out of complacency and self-satisfaction
and the afternoon is there to anchor the morning to our job of doing
real work with real students in real classrooms, our days will pass
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