It's good to step outside disciplinary boundaries,
to venture across specialized borders, then turn around, look back and
see one's home from new angles. I've been doing just that for the past
three years, working as a writing specialist in Miami University's School
of Business, charged with "improving the writing of the undergraduates"
there. I've been forced to look anew at my sometimes facile assumptions
about the purposes for writing instruction, surprised (and somewhat
dismayed) by how much I take for granted through my insider's view of
what teaching writing should accomplish. I've been humbled by my ignorance
of other disciplines' vocabulary, epistemology, and methodology. Most
of all, I've been challenged (and gladly) to rethink my own rhetoric,
to practice more consciously than I've ever done a constant attention
to audience, purpose, and subject. I've come to see composition's rhetorical
context much more broadly, and as a result, I've come back to English
(where I also work and teach every day) arguing that our discipline
needs more consciously to extend and monitor the rhetorical contexts
in which we speak and write.
Joseph Petraglia's Reality By Design: The Rhetoric and Technology
of Authenticity in Education also argues for renewed attention
to rhetorical context. In this truly interdisciplinary book, Petraglia
makes a convincing case for the reasons teachers should regard themselves
as rhetoricians who must invent and arrange compelling arguments, directed
at an audience of students, about how and why their pedagogy and subject
matter apply directly beyond the classroom. In other words, making education
or learning "authentic"--connected to the "real world"--does not reside
in subject matter or method alone, or even in the latest technology;
authenticity, like education, is a concept that requires and deserves
our best rhetorical arguments. In fact, Petraglia says that education
is best seen as argument. His basic goal in this study is to bring what
he calls a "rhetorical perspective" to the disciplines of educational
psychology and educational technology. Like my work in the School of
Business, reading this book forces me to turn around, look from different
angles, and rethink some of the basic assumptions of my field. I also
see in Petraglia's work--although he doesn't say so explicitly--the
insistence that all the audiences for our work (and not just an audience
of students) deserve our best rhetorical efforts.
Bringing a rhetorical context to discussions of education and learning
may not seem terribly new to many readers, but, like David Russell in
Writing in the Academic Disciplines, for example, or Cheryl
Geisler in Academic Literacy and the Nature of Expertise, Petraglia
demonstrates how rhetorical perspectives can seem foreign, or invisible,
to scholars and teachers outside of English or communication studies.
Conversely, he also argues that professionals in rhetoric and composition
too often dismiss or ignore what may seem to be the scientific research
and practice of educational technology and psychology. Petraglia says
in his introduction that "rhetoric, when done right, has everything
to do with everything," and the entire work makes the case for crossing
borders and learning new languages. Throughout this work, he insists
on rhetorical awareness of audience and the need to persuade that audience
of his meaning's worth: "I am . . . struck by the similarities of the
interests of cognitivists and rhetoricians, and, with the advent of
constructivist and situationist variations on cognitivism, their increasing
convergence. . . . In establishing our shared object of inquiry, the
commonly misunderstood discipline of rhetoric may be demystified for
cognitive scientists and educators, just as I would hope that readers
coming from rhetoric-related fields may come to appreciate the essentially
cognitive nature of their own interests." I should point out, however,
that this is not a writing-across-the-curriculum book. Petraglia is
interested in more than how to improve the teaching of writing: he investigates
the philosophical grounding and practical outcomes of what it means
to connect learning and teaching to the "real world."
Petraglia begins with a thorough review of the concept of authenticity
as a goal--what he calls a desideratum--in education. He wants
to show that the "Western educational tradition has culminated in the
contemporary and widespread view that school learning should rightfully,
and nontrivially, correspond to the world outside of school"; moreover,
this objective is "the result of a confluence of socially and culturally
informed choices." Authenticity, he argues, is "not an intrinsic property
possessed by an object but rather a judgment, a decision made
on the part of the learner constrained by the sociocultural matrix within
which he or she operates." That's why Petraglia insists that teachers
must argue for the authenticity of their subject matter and
their pedagogy. He also investigates teachers' attempts to "pre-authenticate"
by designing syllabi, selecting course readings, creating tasks, problems,
or contexts that individual students will likely judge to be meaningfully
connected to their conceptions of reality. Petraglia cites three conditions
of authenticity: the learner feels "ownership" over or "responsibility"
for learning; the task must be "project-based," with the parts contributing
to a clear "bigger picture"; and the work must encourage the learner
to "generate multiple perspectives." Despite the rather technical language
here, which is part of Petraglia's own subdisciplinary context, these
goals sound remarkably similar to those of process or critical writing
pedagogy. What Petraglia adds is a close examination of how educators
have attempted to make school learning approximate "real" learning,
a task he acknowledges is easy to describe in theory and difficult to
enact in practice: "it is one thing," he reminds his readers, "to understand
learning in everyday situations and entirely another thing to capture
the dynamics of that learning and then set them in motion on cue."
Petraglia analyzes authenticity as both a contested term and an implicit
epistemology, a stance he traces historically and philosophically. He
presents his analysis by connecting authenticity as a goal, a method,
and a judgment to what he calls the "constructivist metatheory" that
has come to dominate rhetoric, psychology, and education. Petraglia
reviews constructivism as that term has been defined and developed in
cognitive psychology. As someone raised in composition in the 1970s,
I welcome this return trip to Vygotsky, Dewey, and many other thinkers
from cognitive fields, and I encourage readers who believe that Kenneth
Bruffee or James Berlin invented social constructionism to take a look
at this book. Petraglia tells his readers that "the desideratum of authenticity
in education has grown out of century-long intellectual progression.
. . . Our professional interest in the 'real world' is not traceable
to any particular constructivist theorist, but to a general dissatisfaction
with transmission models of learning, instructivist modes of teaching,
and theories of mind that preclude context." For its interdisciplinary
history alone, this book is a worthwhile read.
One of the real benefits of this study is that Petraglia reminds his
audience(s) of the intellectual roots of our most basic assumptions
about teaching. It's no doubt a good idea periodically to reexamine
one's implicit beliefs and strategies, especially from new disciplinary
perspectives. For rhetoric and composition, a field sometimes too eager
to deem anything that comes with the prefix "post" an improvement, I
think Petraglia's careful look at the historical contexts of constructivism
is useful. He shows how this term has been defined, argued over, and
used in contexts outside the narrow confines of one disciplinary specialty.
Petraglia describes the "triumph of constructivism" as evidenced in
talk of the "real world, the everyday," but also notes the irony of
our certainty about the importance of student-centeredness, social/cultural/material
contexts, and the contingency of knowledge: "just when the importance
of the real world has finally made itself felt in education and psychology,
the postmodernity that furthers the constructivist cause has cast the
realness of the world in doubt." The whole book, in a sense, attempts
to answer this epistemological and pedagogical dilemma. As Petraglia
notes, "constructivism highlights the contingency of knowledge and knowing,
and thus, in a very real sense, threatens the entire educational enterprise."
Furthermore, even if one is willing to ignore that epistemological bind,
as Petraglia argues educators do all the time, not only is it difficult
to capture the dynamics of authentic learning in a school setting, it
is also problematic to assume the teacher can know anyone else's reality:
"taking constructivism seriously means facing the discomfort of not
knowing ahead of time what students accept as an everyday or real-world
problem and instead viewing authentication as an ongoing process that
presents the teacher with many rhetorical opportunities but no guarantees."
Yet, Petraglia also shows how much we take for granted about
the basic tenets of constructivist philosophy and how much we need to
believe in the authentic nature of our pedagogy: "the term authenticity
and its synonyms lulls us into the belief that we do not need to explain
ourselves. . . . We do, in fact, fall back on faith--faith that what
seems real (and thus, authentic) to me, seems real (and thus authentic)
to my students." So, he argues, by interrogating authenticity, teachers
might "better understand the obstacles we face in designing genuinely
constructivist learning environments, obstacles that may be obscured
by our often facile references to 'student-centered' pedagogy, to 'everyday'
problem-solving, and 'contextualized learning,' and to the 'real world.'"
In other words, Petraglia's questions focus on how teachers might design
real-world applications for their students, why they might wish to do
so, and what the trade-offs of such design might be. Petraglia's "solution"
to his epistemological and pedagogical contradictions rests in a "rhetorical
perspective" on these problems. He proposes that "the rhetorical tradition
provides a framework that might be used to resolve the challenge constructivism
poses to educators as it is a framework that emphasizes the explicitly
dialogic nature of learning and accentuates the role of argument and
persuasion."
The heart of this study lies in Petraglia's analysis of the ways educational
technology has tried to negotiate this double bind between the desire
to create genuinely meaningful structures for student learning while
admitting that knowledge is itself constructed, contingent, and fluid.
Petraglia focuses on educational technology as a field "representative
of the challenge faced by constructivist educators generally" because
its practitioners, "more than any other specialists, perhaps, have taken
on themselves the challenge of literally constructing contexts for learning
and accept the burden of making their ideas material." A list of the
tenets of educational technology might be useful here; it certainly
was to me. According to the experts, technological learning "environments"
should provide multiple representations of reality; focus on constructing,
not reproducing, knowledge; contextualize rather than abstract information;
rely on real-world, case-based tasks; foster reflection; and support
collaboration." This agenda should sound familiar to compositionists
or to anyone who teaches where a liberal education program holds sway
over undergraduate curricula. Petraglia adds a perspective whose language
may seem mechanistic rather than humanist, but part of his purpose in
analyzing educational technology is to demonstrate its increasing attention
to human learning--in other words, its rhetorical component. Petraglia
reviews many technological methods for constructing authentic learning
"environments," and in this section of the book, I'm truly far from
my own home and expertise, but it's interesting to see the intersections
of disciplines here. For example, it is much easier for me to understand
efforts to provide, through educational technology, "anchored instruction"
or "goal-based scenarios" when Petraglia describes them as attempts
to create "thick problems," following Clifford Geertz's lead. According
to Petraglia, multimedia, interactive computers, hypertext, and networked
environments serve constructivist goals by providing "cognitive apprenticeship"
for students--for example, coaching, responding, questioning, and encouraging
activity and reflection.
At the very end of the book, Petraglia pitches his own educational
technology, a software package titled Reality Check: A Rhetorical
Approach to Constructivist Learning. I'm intrigued by this system,
since it attempts to enact precisely the work I do with professors and
students in the School of Business, where I visit classes, read assignments
and student writing, and try to help teachers see how writing and rhetoric
might further their disciplinary goals. Reality Check uses
the "metaphor of education as argument" and "prompts educators and students
independently to construct a task profile by identifying relevant variables
and giving reasons and evidence for the relevance in order to articulate
and compare their sense of how elements of the task correspond to the
assignment and to the 'real world.'" Specifically, the software program
requires the teacher to enter an assignment and then to "profile" it
by describing such things as what parts of the task will be weighted
most heavily in evaluation or what parts require the greatest "student
creativity or initiative." Next, the student "profiles" her or his understanding
of the assignment, marking up the assignment just as the teacher did.
Then, the program uses all this data to "contrast the evidence each
side finds relevant in performing the task as part of an academic assignment."
Reality Check may note, for example, that the teacher thinks
using certain tools or sources is key to a successful response but that
the student seems unaware that such tools exist. Finally, the teacher
and student meet to discuss the results that Reality Check
provides, a "textual as well as graphical representation . . . that
identifies the variables and the evidence each side finds relevant."
Petraglia says that the "real function" of this computer program is
to "prompt sustained reflection" and "to provide structure for dialogue
between teacher and student."
Would I sound naive and hopelessly retro if I said that this dialogue
and reflection ought to take place in class, in cover letters on drafts,
in conferences? In other words, have we gotten to the point where we
need the intervention of computer technology to initiate and sustain
reflective practice and explicit conversation with our students about
what we are up to in our courses? Petraglia says that the worth of his
program is that it "highlights the argumentative nature of education
and allows the teacher to present his or her case for the importance
of the task to the overall assignment and the relevance of the assignment
to the learner's real world." Although I think this kind of presentation
ought to occur in class, I realize how reluctant many teachers are to
discuss writing explicitly. Therefore, I'm intrigued with this software
program, and I'd definitely like to see its prompts, for much writing
across the curriculum work demands precisely this kind of explicit discussion
of rhetoric, and it particularly demands the savvy to translate underlying
assumptions for teachers and students. It's highly likely that many
professors (in and outside of English) who are unaccustomed to thinking
overtly about the rhetoric of their assignments would find such a tool
revealing and useful. It might be particularly useful in my own interdisciplinary
context--a school of business--where the "real world" is held up as
the final goal and arbiter of teaching and learning.
Yet, I must say, for all the attention to authenticity and connection
to context and experience in this study, the "real world" here sometimes
seems oddly unreal. I would suggest three particular sites that Petraglia
might usefully include in his investigation of authenticity. First,
Petraglia does not acknowledge the teacher's "real world" or the possibility
that the teacher is a learner him or herself. My cross-curricular work
has taught me that any attempt at changing teachers' practices must
begin with these two assumptions. Next, Petraglia pays scant attention
to students' lives outside of school, to the politics of social location
that directly affect individuals' concepts of "reality." At the same
time, there is little discussion of the day-to-day real worlds of students
in school. Surely one "authentic" goal is for students to learn how
to manage all the tasks required of them, how to maneuver and negotiate
all the disciplinary discourses and expectations they encounter. I think
we need to make more explicit--more authentic--connections across disciplines
so that the entire experience of education becomes more meaningful,
less fragmented. Finally, I would hope for more attention to the ways
that school "really" reflects and affects the public culture that creates,
sustains, and uses education. We need not only to be inventing arguments
for our students about how what we're teaching is relevant to their
"real worlds" in and out of school; we also need to convince the public
that what we're offering is also relevant to them.
Petraglia says in his preface that "an academic life without interdisciplinarity
is not worth living." I'm drawn to this powerful line, but I fear it's
one that not only requires but resists our best arguments. My complaints
about what's not in this study arise, no doubt, from my own narrow disciplinary
perspectives. I kept thinking that if Petraglia had looked toward feminist
and critical pedagogy, for example, he might have arrived at more complicated
questions and answers about connections between school and reality.
If education is argument, then we need to examine more closely, and
perhaps more generously, the evidence we accept and reject, the ethos
of the speakers we listen to and ignore, the political and epistemological
foundations of knowledge we embrace and resist. My reading of this new
and useful book reminds me that what happens too often is that disciplinarity
obscures other views, which only goes to show that the borders are rigid,
that the disciplinary forces keeping us at home are indeed strong.