Writing across the curriculum can no longer be called
a new idea. Early in the 1970’s federal and corporate grants began to
support research investigating the relationship between writing and
learning and to provide start-up money to implement programs designed
to improve student performance in both areas. Since then the movement
has taken several directions. Most interesting has been the basic research.
Colleagues have begun to examine the forms discourse assumes in various
disciplines and the relationship between particular discourse forms
and the patterns of thought within a discipline. Colleagues have begun
to investigate the composing processes of scientists and engineers to
determine whether there are differences in the manner of writing in
science and technology and the humanities, Colleagues have begun to
survey the various types and purposes of writing in the workplace. This
research, reported regularly in our scholarly journals, has not yet
reached a stage allowing confident, wide-ranging assertions. There have
been some important discoveries, but our conclusions must remain tentative.
The real impact of
writing across the curriculum, in fact, has been the various faculty
development schemes designed to implement this promising but as yet unproven
research. Anyone who keeps even slightly in touch with developments in
composition has read one of the many program descriptions appearing in our
journals or seen one of the “dog and pony shows” that too frequently dominate
conference programs. Even the Sunday newspaper will include a feature story
describing yet another cross-curricular writing program which seems to have
raised the standardized test scores at the local highschool. And those who do
not read or attend conferences aren’t spared exposure to writing across the
curriculum. Sitting innocently in their offices, doors cracked, they wait
diligently for a student to came by for some counsel until a book vendor intrudes,
selling this or that new text based on this or that writing across the
curriculum program headed by this or that famous researcher. We have been
swamped by writing across the curriculum during the last several years. We
ought to take a break and let the basic research catch up with and inform the
proliferation of applications. Much of what we are doing may be of questionable
value.
Given the need to improve student (and faculty) writing and learning,
and given the continuing presence of money earmarked by administrators
for “outcomes oriented” programs, a respite is not likely. At best we
may be able to identify and avoid less than helpful practices while
advertising and emulating positive ones. Such is my purpose here in
reviewing two relatively recent texts dealing with writing across the
curriculum. The Rites of Writing suffers a theoretical naivetee
and failure of direction. It continues the dubious anecdotal tradition
in composition research. Teaching Writing in All Disciplines’
provides a useful, thorough and balanced exposition of theory and practice,
including techniques developed at various institutions to improve teaching
and student writing and learning.
The Rites of Writing includes a few god ideas but does not
as a whole contribute to writing across the curriculum. As the title
suggests, the book is a celebration of the efforts made by the University
of Wisconsin-Stevens Point to respond to the “Why Johnny Can’t Write”
dilemma of the 1970’s. Each spring the Writing Laboratory sponsors a
conference to discuss writing in all variety. Mary Croft, in the “Introduction,”
sets the scene: “And every spring for two days our campus here at Stevens
Point becomes a one-room schoolhouse as over twenty-five hundred gradeschoolers,
highschoolers, community writers, teachers, students, people from everywhere
gather to talk about writing. No charge, no registration, just an interest
in writing” (p. 1). In fact, the text is a collection of essays by keynote
speakers and participants in the conferences. The nature of the
collection causes it to be generally uneven and sometimes self-contradictory.
Among the seventeen essays collected are tributes to creative writing,
verse speeches, exhortations on the importance of revision, and assessments
of the current state of affairs in writing and the teaching of writing.
Contributors include Denis Levertov, Richard Lloyd-Jones, Donald Murray,
Steven Judy, and Thomas Pearsall.
The major problem with the collection is its shotgun approach to the topic.
Plenty of lead gets out of the barrel but little hits the target. There
is no central organizing principle beyond the assertion that we all
write and ought to love writing. The text scrupulously avoids the theoretical
and provides little efficient information; i.e., information I as a
writer, a writing program director, or writing instructor could abstract
and put to work. Too often contributors throw out pet peeves about English
teachers and common errors. At the same time these essayists frequently
fail to treat their topic with any depth or comprehensibility. Too many
essays report gossip rather than provide instruction.
The best (or worst)
example of a dubious contribution is a short series of anecdotes by Frances
Hamerstrom, a wildlife researcher and author of children’s books. In ‘The Need
For Revision?” she recounts her memories of learning to write. Her governess
(!) worked hard and taught her that revision was an admission of failure to be
avoided whenever possible. And, of course, the value of this lesson is borne
out by Ms. Hamerstrom’s subsequent success as a writer. The anecdotes continue.
Her granddaughter recently had to revise a story six times for a school
assignment. Hamerstrom comments: “What I object to is that she was forced to
produce a sloppy first draft” (p. 53, emphasis mine). She continues her
diatribe, asking if our current interest in revision is a fetish—not only
obscuring the final good, but also forcing poor work habits? (p. 54).
While this may be an interesting if somewhat iconoclastic claim, she
chooses neither to elaborate her criticism nor to provide workable alternatives.
Her anecdotes can lead only to ad hoc solutions: “Flow and mood
require psychological preparation and timing. So my rule is never start
a book until you are prepared to see time enough clear to finish without
major interruptions . . ., and then write it” (p. 55). For me, both
as a writer who must live with interruptions and as a teacher of writing
who knows the life of my undergraduate students to be one continuous
interruption, this is not helpful information. Ms. Hamerstrom may be
an ally of those teaching writing in the trenches, but her advice is
not helpful. Too many of the essays collected in The Rites of Writing
fall into the same category.
There are a few helpful
articles. “Effective Outline Preparation and Use” by Dolores Landreman presents
a useful procedure to help students plan and manage common types of technical
writing. Donald Murray’s “Conference Guidelines” and Richard Lloyd-Jones’ “A
Garden of Error” both present systematic and useful treatments of the topics
they address. However, both have completed more elaborate work elsewhere. In
short, there is nothing really new in this collection and much which may be
counterproductive.
Teaching Writing in All Disciplines, part of the New Directions
For Teaching and Learning Series from Jossey-Bass, represents the other
side of the coin in terms of comprehensibility and usefulness. This
text collects essays by both writing across the curriculum theoreticians
and practitioners. Their primary aim is helping readers understand important
concepts like writing as process, and the relations between writing
and learning, and enabling readers to implement these by describing
working projects in classes as diverse as mathematics and finance.
The contributors are familiar writing across the curriculum names.
Toby Fulwiler’s ‘Writing: An Act of Cognition” digests much writing
and learning theory and presents Britton’s concept of expressive language
in a manner understandable to any intelligent and interested reader.
In “Microtheme Strategies for Developing Cognitive Skills,” John Bean
and his colleagues Dean Drenk and F. D. Lee describe a program using
short writings of varying degrees of cognitive sophistication to teach
humanities, science, and business. They present a hierarchy of cognitive
skills and a sequence of assignments to allow students to move effectively
through the hierarchy. Their points are clear; their examples are sensible
and easily adaptable to a variety of content areas and institutions.
The microtheme concept represents a significant application of sound
research.
Christopher Thaiss and Elaine Maimon both addrss programmatic concerns.
In “The Virginia Consortium of Faculty Writing Programs: A Variety of
Practices,” Thaiss provides descriptions of working projects in various
disciplines.2 In “Writing Across the Curriculum: Past, Present,
and Future,” Maimon places contemporary developments in rhetoric and
epistemology within the framework of the history of education. Each
article includes a bibliography. Bruce Petersen collects and provides
helpful annotations for “Additional Resources in the Practice of Writing
Across the Curriculum.”
Teaching Writing in All Disciplines is an effective writing
across the curriculum manual including theoreticl, practical, historical,
and bibliographical information useful to writing program directors,
writing teachers, interested administrators and non-English faculty.
It is a significant contribution, an excellent interim text while writing
across the curriculum awaits the further contributions promised by
ongoing basic research.
New Mexico State University
Las Cruces, New Mexico